Stung Into Life

When the call of adventure dawned on the wayfaring traveller

He sat down at the rock face quite tearful weary and sweaty

Thought about fate meaning and streamed in consciousness

A poet with a license to kill time and serene wavering spirit 


Fond of nature and nurture he looked down a perilous cliff 

Life had been poisonous recently and in need of reflection

Close to a meandering delta of final conclusive determination

He moved forth inch by un-relentless inch in search of resolve


Freedom seemed far away in the clouds with linings receding

Valleys of hopelessness approached vision void and oblivion

And yet he felt a tickle of excitement close to his wounded heart

Redirected his mind to a creepy sensation touching his mind


He recalled his yoga teacher’s advice not to hurt sentient beings

Secured mountain pose and lotus position for focus and peace

In awe he looked at the Skeleton Tarantula’s urticating bristles

Stretched on his skin and ready to puncture his ultimate life line


Smooth hairy and frightened the little creature pondered

Whether to play dead or defend its masterful existence with 

One venomous bite as the lonely seeker of truth closed his eyes

And calmly decided that wisdom required patience and kindness


06th January 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/7/2020 9:52:00 PM
Sincere congratulations for your Honorable Mention in Brian's contest, Kai - keep the ink flowing, my friend, and best wishes for a bountiful and healthy New Year. Blessings! :o)
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Date: 1/6/2020 1:55:00 PM
Hi Kai, a deep, philosophical write - wishing you a very happy 2020. Best wishes, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/6/2020 5:37:00 AM
wow, you got my attention. I would not have liked to be that person on top of that mountain. "A poet with a license to kill " hmmm, your poetry is the best Kai, hope your holiday was good, Take care, xo
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