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First sonnet
R.J. Lindley,
April 3rd, 1979
Sonnet
Syllables Per Line:10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10
Total # Syllables:140
Total # Words:102
Second sonnet
Robert J. Lindley, 4-08-2019
Sonnet in nines.
Syllables Per Line:9 9 9 9 9 9 9 9 9 9 0 9 9 9 9
Total # Syllables:126
Total # Words:90

What Great Love, Our Memory Shall Remain What is left when I am buried and dust ancient grave upon which a white-stone rests vanished shades of a future we did trust as if that one great wave would never crest! What great love or memory shall remain when deepest of sleep, centuries accrue will it matter wealth, worthless earthly gain as paying of the pied piper comes due? What truth, shall weigh in as ones repentance when exposing light shines its judging gleams will sad regrets reduce final sentence or give power to mercy craving dreams? Pray tell, can great sorrows yield forgiveness? Birthing mercy a gift, divine kindness? R.J. Lindley, April 3rd, 1979 Sonnet ************************************ Fate Peeled Back Its Deepest Dark Curtain Fate peeled back its deepest dark curtain leaving nothing to chance, all certain this year the bravest of heroes dies golden streets flooded with angel cries. What justice, one so young shall perish midst of love of those he so cherish roars not a harder, greater anguish than living through and in pain languish With hunger for life, for love's sweet touch so cursed and sadly fated such Fate, its massive powers so decreed greatest hero on battlefield bleeds steps into eternity, no seeds grave now hidden by overgrown weeds! Robert J. Lindley, 4-08-2019 Sonnet in nines. ******************************* Sonnet doubles..... a 40 year span

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Date: 4/10/2019 8:14:00 PM
Yes, it can, "can great sorrows yield forgiveness? Birthing mercy a gift, divine kindness?" "grave now hidden by overgrown weeds!" In some way it's sad to think that the sum of our lives, is a weed-filled plot; impetus to do more while we're alive.3a4
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/14/2019 7:21:00 PM
Thank you my friend. The sum of our lives should be more than the spot of ground we end up be deposited in. It should be the abundant good we have done for others, the love we shared and the beauty in life we created.
Date: 4/8/2019 11:43:00 PM
I am marveling at both the patterns of ABABAB and AABBCCDD, the continuity of the syllable count, and the crux of this beautiful missive, that shows such discipline and order, all the while maintaining EXACT syllable counts. I am so intrigued by my reaction to this, for I despise math, and yet, this seems to be all about the counts. The fact they are "sister poems" written forty years apart, and the beauty of both is also pretty much holding me hostage here, Robert. Bravo!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/14/2019 7:19:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Math has always been a favorite subject of mine and fits well into my poetic creativity.

Book: Shattered Sighs