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Smokey - A big black Persian cat .

Friend, family and partner in crime.

Smokey was a funny cat. You could see him think. His place of choice to do this, Was the kitchen sink. He'd loll about for hours, In seemingly deep thought; Musing o'er life's mysteries, Or the mouse he never caught. He looked so wise just sitting there, Mysterious and ancient, Never bothering anyone, Complacent and so patient. The only thing he didn't like, Was being combed and groomed. If you picked up his comb and brush, He'd quickly leave the room. I swear sometimes he read our minds, Knew what we were about. He understood our every word, Of that there was no doubt. He was my friend from babyhood. We were babes together. He taught me climbing, stealth and patience. Our bond could not be severed. He taught me to look nonchalant, And even innocent, If by chance I should get caught, Whene're house rules were bent. Whenever Mom and Dad were cross, He taught me how to blend, Into the background or become, So cute they had to grin. My memories of him are fond. I thought he'd live forever. He taught me fun and love and loyalty. He won't die, not ever.

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Date: 4/1/2021 8:54:00 AM
This is a lovely and entertaining poem to read, Judy. We have several pets at home, amongst them our cat Smokey. Yours was black, ours is dark grey. ~ Best regards & happy Easter. // paul
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Date: 3/28/2021 4:46:00 PM
Hello Judy ... a nice easy to read poem taking us back to your first pet love - very enjoyable Judy - Lindsay
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Judy Ball
Date: 3/28/2021 7:29:00 PM
Thanks bunches Lindsay God Bless, JB.
Date: 3/28/2021 7:13:00 AM
Awesome tribute, Judy. A joy to read ~
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Date: 3/28/2021 7:22:00 AM
Thanks bunches Line. Smokey was indeed a very special cat and lives today within my heart. God Bless, JB
Date: 3/28/2021 3:51:00 AM
Smokey is forever in your heart, Judy. Seems like he's been there all along. I do believe cats are highly intelligent. They know how to manipulate us to get their way just by being "cute." And I'm certain at least two of my cats understood what I was saying. I'd ask, "Wanna go out?" They would go to the door. Hold on to your precious memories, Judy. What a delight Smokey was. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/28/2021 3:13:00 AM
We never forget them Judy, they become part of the family. Tom
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Date: 3/27/2021 10:15:00 PM
So we have the beginning of the saga of beloved Smokey. I love reading his adventures.
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