Sleepwalking Slumber

My eyes of umber caught in a slumber 
dreams pull me under, I’m in a trance.
My mind asunder hearing thunder,
the night has come with another chance.
Sleepwalking brings one more dance.

My arms spread out my mind does shout, 
my eyes stout though closed with might.
I walk about the same hallway route
that I do every denouncing night. 
Deep in my rapt soul I feel the fright. 

Is this a dream? I want to wake and scream, 
but this supreme fugue seems so real.
I go to the extreme with thrill agleam, 
does this exertion hold strange appeal?
Just then I run into the laundry creel. 

My mind astounded, I am dumbfounded, 
for I’m surrounded by a surreal abyss.
Am I grounded or actually confounded, 
in this nightmare I sense life’s amiss. 
My mind does wonder and reality I miss. 

I feel the fear and strange noises I hear, 
for I am near walls that could close me in. 
I steer clear of things that could interfere, 
and hold hope the morn shall soon begin. 
Then I shall awake with alleviation within. 

The dawn ascends, my mind transcends, 
sleepwalking suspends, and I am awake.
Seeking council my friend recommends, 
I think it’s a risk that I wish to take
knowing deep down sleepwalking I forsake. 



Sleepwalking Poetry Contest
John Hamilton
July 15, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 6:59 PM
Congratulations on your win. I loved reading this!
Carber Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 8:26 AM
Laura, you have a remarkable ability to rhyme, even internal rhyming which can be tricky-- yet it all 'works' in this truly delightful poem-- kudos, kid!
Wade Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 3:25 AM
Well done on your win, well deserved lovely piece. Faux
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 1, 2018 at 2:31 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. Beautiful rhyme.
Dutta Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:44 PM
Congrats Laura to win on this wonderful poem.
Roper Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 5:06 PM
:) This is so very beautiful Laura, Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Well-done, Laura. Love the internal rhyme. Congrats on your Podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Very lovely Lulu. Big congratulations on your second placement! : )
Hamilton Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 9:28 AM
You know how much I love internal rhyme Laura, well done, I thought this was WW, was a pleasant surprise to find out it was you! Congrats on a fine win!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Beautifully said, Laura. Good luck in the contest. This is a winner to me.
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