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Sleepwalking Slumber

My eyes of umber caught in a slumber dreams pull me under, I’m in a trance. My mind asunder hearing thunder, the night has come with another chance. Sleepwalking brings one more dance. My arms spread out my mind does shout, my eyes stout though closed with might. I walk about the same hallway route that I do every denouncing night. Deep in my rapt soul I feel the fright. Is this a dream? I want to wake and scream, but this supreme fugue seems so real. I go to the extreme with thrill agleam, does this exertion hold strange appeal? Just then I run into the laundry creel. My mind astounded, I am dumbfounded, for I’m surrounded by a surreal abyss. Am I grounded or actually confounded, in this nightmare I sense life’s amiss. My mind does wonder and reality I miss. I feel the fear and strange noises I hear, for I am near walls that could close me in. I steer clear of things that could interfere, and hold hope the morn shall soon begin. Then I shall awake with alleviation within. The dawn ascends, my mind transcends, sleepwalking suspends, and I am awake. Seeking council my friend recommends, I think it’s a risk that I wish to take knowing deep down sleepwalking I forsake. Sleepwalking Poetry Contest John Hamilton July 15, 2018

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Date: 8/1/2018 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I loved reading this!
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Date: 8/1/2018 8:26:00 AM
Laura, you have a remarkable ability to rhyme, even internal rhyming which can be tricky-- yet it all 'works' in this truly delightful poem-- kudos, kid!
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Date: 8/1/2018 3:25:00 AM
Well done on your win, well deserved lovely piece. Faux
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Date: 8/1/2018 2:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. Beautiful rhyme.
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:44:00 PM
Congrats Laura to win on this wonderful poem.
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Date: 7/31/2018 5:06:00 PM
:) This is so very beautiful Laura, Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/31/2018 4:37:00 PM
Well-done, Laura. Love the internal rhyme. Congrats on your Podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/31/2018 1:37:00 PM
Very lovely Lulu. Big congratulations on your second placement! : )
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Date: 7/31/2018 9:28:00 AM
You know how much I love internal rhyme Laura, well done, I thought this was WW, was a pleasant surprise to find out it was you! Congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 7/15/2018 2:34:00 PM
Beautifully said, Laura. Good luck in the contest. This is a winner to me.
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