Sketching Facade

sketching facade
of old man oak
squirrel chatters

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kingston Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 8:57 PM
From your poem, I gather that each is happy to have the other. In that way, it kind of reminded me of the Giving Tree book, where the tree, your "Old man oak" and the boy "The squirrel" depended on each other. Both friends, growing old together. I like your writing so much. :)
Maverick Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 4:00 AM
Quite a picture you illuminate ML, well scribed words.'
Goldsmith Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 12:51 PM
A fun Haiku write. You are a wonderful writer. Have a great/blessed day as you write away..............
Proxenos Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 12:48 PM
Hi dear NATURE LOVER - so cute, so brief, yet full of meaning. But then again, that is what an excellent Haiku is all about! Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
Romios Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Delightful. ML. I still follow your great advice. “I came here to write poetry, and not to ,get comments.” You know, that was the deepest thought that kept me going and focused. Thank you again for that gift. Pangie
Horsman Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Love to see the finished work. Harry.
Kauffman Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 10:48 AM
A sense of serenity pervades your first two lines until that is interrupted by your noisy squirrel! Delightful ML! Blessings.
Kiser Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 9:03 AM
Thank you Sam.
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