simply haunting

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a breeze strums these chimes tonight ~ from strange and distant lands it's brought such curious melodies Submitted to contest FEBRUARY 2025 POSTED POETRY sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - Honorable Mention Posted on February 18, 2025 (with thanks to Jim Hannah for the inspiration)

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David Crandall

Date: 2/21/2025 8:40:00 AM

Those wind chimes are really a catalyst for the imagination - or maybe they're really a portal to another world - great poem! I can imagine listening to them at night and travelling to curious distant lands.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2025 11:51:00 AM

Isn't that the truth ! delightful comment ~ thank you, David

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/19/2025 9:10:00 PM

Gazing at the whatever-it-is above those chimes is downright scary!! 'Haunting' to the max! (Soup mail, please. Thanx.)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2025 9:35:00 AM

lol ~ it can be haunting in the good sense too ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/18/2025 8:43:00 PM

Thanks for leaving so much room for the imagination! Wonderful.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/19/2025 7:16:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated ~