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Silver Pearls

Gray evening's like gray dawn's ties thicken At the exact same pacing expanse— Both briefly hold the sun's motions in Pallor moored with unmistakableness. I am shaken by her warrior crest, For I more than feel gray's breaking touch; Though not cutting paths perused in lust, But being where gentle pigeons send— For gray evenings like gray dawns there must Be a soft kindred line between them.

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/6/2023 9:51:00 PM

You captured the essence of both evenings and dawns in the fine poem, Paige. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/6/2023 4:46:00 PM

For gray evenings like gray dawns there must Be a soft kindred line between them...sweet lines!

Silent One

Date: 10/5/2023 3:27:00 PM

You do this form very well.. So many great lines here.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/5/2023 2:13:00 AM

Ah talented poetess, i see you’ve done a brilliant dizain! How stunning is this. I love the title and also how you’ve articulated your lines here is absolutely gorgeous, and so very soul hitting! I felt so much reading your lines especially “ I am shaken by her warrior crest, For I more than feel gray's breaking touch;“ deeply moving and creative how you express! You are truly a gifted gem poetic pearl! Keep shining always