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Silly Fool

Mestor, son of Poseidon steady gaze
upon a dazzling mermaid saffron blaze.
Wind swept across her brunette
wet long hair, thoughts of a net
and human ways, hooted in shrill amaze.

Mestor woke amongst an ocean sand bed
of froth, sounds of laughter in the wind spread.
A glimmering pace along
the beach and a droll tone song
in the silver wake of the moon was shed.


8/1/2018


Prizes' Contest: 'Sea Tales Limericks - Old or New - 
Sponsored by:	Carolyn Devonshire

MESTOR A king of one the ten kingdoms of Atlantis--a mythical continent in the Atlantic Ocean. He was a son of Poseidon and Kleite.

http://www.theoi.com/Olympios/PoseidonFamily.html

In folklore, a mermaid is an aquatic creature with the head and upper body of a female human and the tail of a fish.[1] Mermaids appear in the folklore of many cultures worldwide, including the Near East, Europe, Asia, and Africa. The first stories appeared in ancient Assyria, in which the goddess Atargatis transformed herself into a mermaid out of shame for accidentally killing her human lover. Mermaids are sometimes associated with perilous events such as floods, storms, shipwrecks, and drownings. In other folk traditions (or sometimes within the same tradition), they can be benevolent or beneficent, bestowing boons or falling in love with humans.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mermaid
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Leffanta Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Congratulations - especially on your research, but either the mermaid is elfin or that is the largest abalone shell I have ever seen! Well done! Aloha! Rico
Gentry Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 5:35 PM
that's one of the more realistic pictures I have seen of a mermaid. Awesome.
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Nice imagery in your mermaid tale. I swear people were almost all writing about mermaids!! Congrats for your win.
Devonshire Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 3:03 PM
Thanks for providing some background on the mythological history of mermaids, Eve. Many of the entries show Soupers have a fascination with mermaids and mermen. Enjoyed very much! Congratulations. Hugs, Carolyn
Warrior Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 6:36 PM
Nicely crafted my friend...a winner in my court...love & light...^WW^
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 10:07 AM
WoW! Never read such a elegant poetic limerick like this, Eve. You are one gifted poetess. LOVE this poem. A stellar write. Love and joy always, my dear friend.
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Love your take on the theme Eve, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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