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Silhouette Clouds

the clement moon disfigured casting shadows into the night © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/31/2019 12:36:00 PM

Hi Harry, As the moon gently moves towards to and enters the clouds it casts such splendid shadows - I can see it happening in my minds eye. A soothing Monoku! Poetry hugs, Jenny.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/11/2019 5:14:00 PM

Lovely words, dear Harry!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/24/2019 10:42:00 PM

The title drew me, the imagery gave me 'that perfect pause, as a monoku should! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Paul Callus

Date: 1/24/2019 12:25:00 PM

Your image is very striking, Harry, albeit not highlighted in bright colours. Even B&W can produce stunning effects, especially in photography! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/24/2019 8:30:00 AM

Not as colorful an image but still colors my soul in its lovely wording and imagery! Congrats, Harry, on your win in my contest!

Jack Horne

Date: 1/22/2019 3:37:00 PM

wow, you say so much in so few words

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/22/2019 2:43:00 PM

I see the moon's shadow, very graceful write!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/22/2019 1:00:00 PM

Hello Harry, I like the clouds. I like the different shapes they become. The clement clouds would have shadows in the clouds. Have a nice day my friend.

Silent One

Date: 1/22/2019 4:46:00 AM

Now thats imagery in one line... Great one liner..

Charles Messina

Date: 1/21/2019 7:15:00 PM

Wonderful monoku, Harry!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2019 5:46:00 PM

Good one. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/21/2019 10:05:00 AM

Very creative and appealing description of the shadows the moon casts as its light penetrates the clouds, Harry! Best wishes in Kim's contest with this amazing monoku. Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/21/2019 8:20:00 AM

Great imagery, Harry.