Shower Of Bliss

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I looked at the uncertain future across the anguished time,
while suffocating suffering held me in the devastating grip, 
and my bestowed heart was shattered by the pain of longing, 
but I found no comforting support to cling to. I felt as if my 
boat capsized in the tempest, and as I tried to swim to the 
shore I heard the inner voice tell me to be impassive, for the 
new sun of hope would rise again. I then found my heart turn  
into a butterfly, flittering in sunbeam to the valley of roses,  
blooming in spring under the gloomy sky turned blue. I felt my 
soul unfurl the divine petals, saturated with the tranquil shower 
of bliss.

Visual

My life faced suffering 
time with future unknown,
wriggled in the crushing 
clutch of stifling torment.
My given heart splintered 
and bled in yearning ache. 
7-No soothing arms I found near 
5-to reach out and cling.
In rough sea my boat sank 
in storm of agony,
for shelter I tried to 
swim to shore not in sight.
The inner voice told me 
to get detached and see
7-rays of hope in new sunrise
5-after the dark night.
My heart, a butterfly, 
flew out on latticed wings,
7-in rippling air it flittered 
5-on trail of sun rays 
to vale of rose blooming 
with sparkle of hued spring
under grey sky of gloom,
turning to sapphire dome.
I sensed serenity 
suffuse my sublime core,
my soul opened divine 
petals in deep abyss.
Stillness like summer rain
began to drizzle down
in my serene mind with 
calming shower of bliss.

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Date: 8/17/2024 1:00:00 PM
It looks like you figured this form out very very well. I still don't get it, however. Your writing is superb here, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/17/2024 7:24:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and encouraging comments. You will do it superbly, I am sure.
Date: 8/12/2024 10:23:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write.  I love your line, "I then found my heart turn into a butterfly, flittering in sunbeam to the valley of roses, blooming in spring under the gloomy sky turned blue." I can see it...   Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/12/2024 10:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paula for liking the poem.
Date: 8/12/2024 8:23:00 AM
Enjoyed very much, Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/12/2024 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
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