She Waits

She waits in traffic while running her errands singing along to the car radio, then waits in lines at various places smiling at faces she doesn’t know. Evenings, she waits for her husband cooking dinners she knows he will love. Later, inside a room made for waiting, she writes poetry prior to the appointment that alters her life. She next finds herself waiting week after week for the chemo to take its effect - waiting and puking night after night, but still always tucking her children in bed, Bible stories read and nightly prayers said. Soon her strength wanes, but she waits for good news. It’s not in her nature to wait for the bad. She waits, and her strength never wavers. In the end, her husband is waiting on her - hand and foot, like she’d waited on him. They’ve laid her to rest, and her family all know where she’s gone, she waits there for them. Written Jan. 27, 2016 for the Becca's Inspiration "Waiting" Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish
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Godwin Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 3:37 AM
I am touched and teary eyed. Oh, Andrea, you moved me ... CayCay
Carter Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 10:38 PM
We have very different styles for the most part but I really enjoy your work nonetheless, especially ones like this where I can find stylistic similarities.
A   Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:28 AM
Andrea, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
Leiser Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 12:30 AM
This is so sad but also so poignant. Very touching, Andrea.
Inman Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Emotional write Andrea.
Garg Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 5:48 AM
Excellent write on the theme...... congrats on your win.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 2:26 AM
Lovely poem n win Andrea ..so well put.. big congrats!
Onclaud Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 10:21 PM
the repetition of " wait" gives this wonderful piece its moving, heartbreaking beat... congrats on your fine win, andie..huggs!
Gentry Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea! This one got me... very well written, great imagery, flowed, hit several emotions. I'm not used to such seriousness from you and you did it well.
Lawless Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Tearfully poignant Andrea. The harsh reality of a horrible disease diminished by the honor of love.
Mohn Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:06 PM
Very touching Andrea...I think we have all been effected by versions of this story
Anish Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Hope your health is good - this is the main thing. I remember my battles with bad health and this poems touches me because of that. I think this poem also shows the power of love. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Scars Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 12:53 PM
Oh Andrea, so sad but special..Congrats on your placement lady :) -*Smiles* -luloo
Showalter Swift Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Very sad but insightful...strong woman..nice write
Walker Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 8:20 AM
Powerful, emotional words.
Kendrick Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 7:14 AM
Reads like a winner..A sad story..The family is also waiting for the reunion with her..Thanks for the visits to my blog..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:31 AM
Quite an emotive write dear Andrea.. best wishes!
Docherty Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 2:10 AM
So sad Andrea that still today we have no quick fix. A strong write that I hope is not personal in any way...
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 9:47 PM
This is a moving piece and excellent entry for the contest Andrea. #7
Parker Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 9:11 PM
A very emotional write my friend..I hope it wasn't one written from memory, rather imagination..good luck in the contest
May Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:33 PM
A very moving write Andrea...
Turner Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:25 PM
This is a very sad poem. Well written and very emotional write.
Laurie Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 8:18 PM
Hello Andrea ... could be lyrics for a very emotional song for they certainly touch the heart - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Sage Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 5:21 PM
well written...lovely though sad...best of luck in the contest Andrea
Allison Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Such a sad interpretation of the theme but sadly cancer is something that touches so many lives - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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