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She Waits

She waits in traffic while running her errands singing along to the car radio, then waits in lines at various places smiling at faces she doesn’t know. Evenings, she waits for her husband cooking dinners she knows he will love. Later, inside a room made for waiting, she writes poetry prior to the appointment that alters her life. She next finds herself waiting week after week for the chemo to take its effect - waiting and puking night after night, but still always tucking her children in bed, Bible stories read and nightly prayers said. Soon her strength wanes, but she waits for good news. It’s not in her nature to wait for the bad. She waits, and her strength never wavers. In the end, her husband is waiting on her - hand and foot, like she’d waited on him. They’ve laid her to rest, and her family all know where she’s gone, she waits there for them. Written Jan. 27, 2016 for the Becca's Inspiration "Waiting" Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish

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Date: 2/4/2016 3:37:00 AM
I am touched and teary eyed. Oh, Andrea, you moved me ... CayCay
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Date: 2/3/2016 10:38:00 PM
We have very different styles for the most part but I really enjoy your work nonetheless, especially ones like this where I can find stylistic similarities.
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Date: 2/3/2016 3:28:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/1/2016 12:30:00 AM
This is so sad but also so poignant. Very touching, Andrea.
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Date: 1/29/2016 10:05:00 AM
Emotional write Andrea.
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Date: 1/29/2016 5:48:00 AM
Excellent write on the theme...... congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:26:00 AM
Lovely poem n win Andrea ..so well put.. big congrats!
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Date: 1/28/2016 10:21:00 PM
the repetition of " wait" gives this wonderful piece its moving, heartbreaking beat... congrats on your fine win, andie..huggs!
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea! This one got me... very well written, great imagery, flowed, hit several emotions. I'm not used to such seriousness from you and you did it well.
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Date: 1/28/2016 7:44:00 PM
Tearfully poignant Andrea. The harsh reality of a horrible disease diminished by the honor of love.
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Date: 1/28/2016 7:06:00 PM
Very touching Andrea...I think we have all been effected by versions of this story
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Date: 1/28/2016 2:52:00 PM
Hope your health is good - this is the main thing. I remember my battles with bad health and this poems touches me because of that. I think this poem also shows the power of love. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/28/2016 12:53:00 PM
Oh Andrea, so sad but special..Congrats on your placement lady :) -*Smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:59:00 AM
Very sad but insightful...strong woman..nice write
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Date: 1/28/2016 8:20:00 AM
Powerful, emotional words.
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Date: 1/28/2016 7:14:00 AM
Reads like a winner..A sad story..The family is also waiting for the reunion with her..Thanks for the visits to my blog..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2016 4:31:00 AM
Quite an emotive write dear Andrea.. best wishes!
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Date: 1/28/2016 2:10:00 AM
So sad Andrea that still today we have no quick fix. A strong write that I hope is not personal in any way...
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Date: 1/27/2016 9:47:00 PM
This is a moving piece and excellent entry for the contest Andrea. #7
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Date: 1/27/2016 9:11:00 PM
A very emotional write my friend..I hope it wasn't one written from memory, rather imagination..good luck in the contest
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:33:00 PM
A very moving write Andrea...
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:25:00 PM
This is a very sad poem. Well written and very emotional write.
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:18:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... could be lyrics for a very emotional song for they certainly touch the heart - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 1/27/2016 5:21:00 PM
well written...lovely though sad...best of luck in the contest Andrea
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Date: 1/27/2016 1:56:00 PM
Such a sad interpretation of the theme but sadly cancer is something that touches so many lives - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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