Shaky

Cold fish of a handshake ~ Wedding bells prove heartaches

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Michael Tor

Date: 3/24/2024 9:51:00 PM

The small details such as a handshake can give off important insight as to the good the bad or the ugly of it all. Thanks for sharing my friend...

Bill Baker

Date: 3/22/2024 5:58:00 PM

You left this open to our own thoughts as to what's going on, Gershon. I do not like the cold fish handshakes. BB

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/23/2024 8:29:00 PM

Who does? lol. thanks, Bill

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/22/2024 12:10:00 PM

Nice poem on the pitfalls of weddings.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/23/2024 8:30:00 PM

Thanks, Hilda. I guess one never really knows where a wedding may lead...

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 3/22/2024 8:43:00 AM

I got a handshake like that from a grown man when I was a girl of fifteen.Every cell within me wanted to scream For goodness sake man,represent ! Also saw a couple get married sitting in chairs once.That did not turn out well at all.Some things are seen right out the gate,for many proving to be too late.Consigned it seems to a life of less Playing second fiddle in a garage band I guess. V.R.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/23/2024 8:32:00 PM

Represent! ... You sure gave it to that man, Vickey... Never the shy type, you weren't... Keep slinging the hash, gw

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/22/2024 5:19:00 AM

those types of handshakes should tell a person something...beware is what comes to my mind. have a pleasant Friday!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/23/2024 8:34:00 PM

Hidden secrets of the cosmos, Sara...

John Lawless

Date: 3/22/2024 3:31:00 AM

Well, Gershon, if al they did was shake hands....

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/23/2024 8:33:00 PM

Ah, but what secrets their fingers they hid in those handshakes, John.