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Sex In a Bottle

I love when your eyes look into my body, My body made just for you. You love my name, my red, my dress, And my body wants all of you too. I love when you're grabbing both of my hips, Tightly with both of your hands. You dominate and pull me up to your face, And I obey every single command. And then that instant, when your warm wet mouth Envelops my perfect pure nerve. I explode when all of me goes into all of you, Filling your entire reserve. Now, that perfect moment straight after, You tighten your grip and I choke. And you gaze back through my empty body, I'm inside you now, your bottle of coke.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 8/6/2016 3:59:00 PM

WoW! This was awesome in every way. Very creative,your imagination soared in this write. It suddenly got extremely hot and I was like oh he's talking about coke. Brilliant last line. It desevers to be on the "Best New poems list". A gigantic seven:-) Alexis

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/28/2016 8:11:00 AM

Love that last line! Coke. Hot and steamy.

Steve Tomlin

Date: 7/21/2016 5:20:00 AM

Deserves a massive rating. I'd rate this 10 if i could.

Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/21/2016 5:43:00 AM

Wow, thanks Steve, glad u enjoyed my poem. Any ideas for a new poem?

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 7/12/2016 10:24:00 AM

Oh wow,this is astounding Lewis!Who could think a bottle of Coke:)

Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/12/2016 6:03:00 PM

Thank u Sara, the simple things.

Karam Misra

Date: 7/11/2016 10:59:00 PM

Ah, I sighed at the climax! The tempo was frenetic to say the least, and the release .... Wow, Lewis, this one was great for me. A 7 and a fave. ~karam~

Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/12/2016 1:15:00 AM

Thanks Karam, I like this simple style and simple intimate too

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/9/2016 6:59:00 AM

While reading got lost into it, and finally into the bottle. This is perhaps what poetry is. Especially so, given the assembly of grandiose vocabulary we come across usually ...

Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/9/2016 7:49:00 AM

Thanks Probir, ur very astute.

Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/9/2016 7:38:00 AM

Thanks Probir, ur very astute.

Steve Tomlin

Date: 7/9/2016 4:36:00 AM

This is awesome. I don't use this word very often. The first words were unique, pulling me in, immersed into your flow and subject. I love it.

Lewis Raynes
Date: 7/9/2016 4:40:00 AM

Thanks Steve.