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Sensual Loss Sensual Gain

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Her golden locks glide grandly through our gladioli gilded garden gateway,
I gulp ginormous groundbreaking gulleys, 
telltale tear tsunamis cut cataclysmic currents,
raw reckless rupture of romantic render,
terror-stricken tangential tamper seal evidence
on lumpen lunge lonesome lachrymose levee 

Abandoned to anthemion arch ambience awash or afloat with apoplectic angst,
afterthoughts amazing amplitude aligns with an amorous abundance once opulent,
majestic memories marvel at 
mystic magnifying glass that multiplies mammoth moods,
separation from silken sensual strand sculpture in sapphire stone,
this stagnant somber seeker must supplant or suppress solitude’s silent shiver 

Without warning a wellspring whispered windfall weave from winsome woman,
wide-eyed wondrous wakeful wizardry woos whining wildcard wreck,
a cascade of charismatic crystal colour clusters trial and tribulation trauma that trembles deep inside,  
delightful dawn denouement dame drifts in dreamland dale,
“precious pining pristine pearl
I present panoramic passionate parameters to 
propitiate bitter broken-hearted baleful bond.”

Fantastic flourish found festoons for emotional evocative environment evolved,
illustrious intimate intrigue inlaid immediately,
Heather’s halcyon harmonic laces labyrinthine lavender love,
heart healing honeymoon handcraft
herald on high,
supreme sensei soulmates savour 
sentiment surreal beyond an iridescent infinite inkling 

    
Date Posted : April 11th 2022

First Place Podium Medal Winner

JCB BRUL My Lost and Found Love Alliteration Contest

Judged April 21st 2022

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Date: 4/26/2022 2:24:00 AM
Wow Howard, this is lovely! Congratulations on your first placement. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/22/2022 9:09:00 PM
Great alliteration. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2022 3:39:00 PM
My goodness, so much alliteration, Howard. Well done! Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 4/11/2022 7:37:00 AM
Howard, Amazon alliteration! I continued my marvel of reading, liking the imagery set for in such stated alliteration to see if you could indeed keep it up…which you did masterfully. Bravo! Hope you met that golden beauty!
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 4/11/2022 7:47:00 AM
Spellcheck changed my AMAZING to Amazon … Aaaarrrrgh!