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Senryu- In My Red Dream

a red butterfly
stirred me from my crimson sheets-
                           kissed my scarlet lips


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March 2, 2016


Poetry/Senryu/in my red dream
Copyright Protected, ID 16-763-501-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, United Colours: Red
sponsor, Silent One

Second Place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2016

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/14/2016 11:09:00 PM Broken, CONGRATS on your reddish theme. Luv ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/15/2016 8:59:00 AM Linda, thanks for the congrats and the luv ~

James Inman Date: 3/9/2016 8:52:00 AM I adore this. A sweet write that you have used red references turn in to a passionate poem. Love the duality. Amazing how so few words can stir ones emotions. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/9/2016 9:38:00 PM James, so happy you like my red poem, it did turn out kinda sultry, thanks for the amazing !

Red Fiery Date: 3/9/2016 8:02:00 AM You are one and the only one...so unique..!!!! Amazing senryu ! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/9/2016 9:52:00 PM Red, thanks for visiting with the unique and amazing, two words I love ~

Funom Makama Date: 3/5/2016 11:18:00 AM Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful.... Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/5/2016 3:52:00 PM Funom, thanks so much for visiting with the wonderfuls !!!

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/4/2016 2:00:00 PM Hi Broken, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. A beautiful Senryu, of peace and serenity. A dream within a dream. A seven and winging its butterfly wings into my faves....Vlad. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 2:06:00 PM Vlad, thanks so much for the lovely comment, the seven and the fav ~

Laura Leiser Date: 3/3/2016 10:51:00 PM Loved the romantic imagery in this great haiku, BW! Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 12:47:00 AM Laura, thank you for the great comment and the congrats!!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/3/2016 8:18:00 PM oooh la la. One of the very best I have seen yet on the list. Congrats, Constance. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 1:00:00 AM Andrea, thanks for that great compliment and the congrats !!

Eve Roper Date: 3/3/2016 7:27:00 PM Love this poem, congratulations in the contest "Red" win, Constance. Hugs dear friend Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 1:02:00 AM Eve, thanks for the love, the congratulations and the hugs !!!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 3/3/2016 7:04:00 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 1:21:00 AM Nayda, thanks for visiting with the congratulations !

Stephen Pennell Date: 3/3/2016 6:05:00 PM congrats broken wings on your win Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 1:25:00 AM Stephen thanks for the congrats !

Beautiful Scars Date: 3/3/2016 5:09:00 PM BW, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles* Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/4/2016 1:40:00 AM Laura, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and smiles !!

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/3/2016 12:50:00 PM Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/3/2016 4:57:00 PM Sara, thanks for visiting and the compliment ~

Jill Spagnola Date: 3/3/2016 5:45:00 AM What a lovely dream, I love the visuals you choose for your work. They always add zest to your poetry,,:), jill Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/3/2016 11:05:00 AM Jill, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the compliment !!

Robert Heemstra Date: 3/2/2016 8:18:00 PM Beautiful! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/2/2016 8:39:00 PM Robert, thank you so much for visiting with the beautiful !

Lewis Raynes Date: 3/2/2016 6:57:00 PM love this simple yet engaging and beautiful write Broken Wings. Thanks Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/2/2016 7:38:00 PM Lewis, thanks for visiting my red poem with beautiful !

Walter T. Ashe Date: 3/2/2016 6:34:00 PM Absolutely....visually and expressively surreal! This captures my artistic senses! Nice...Broken Wing! Write On! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 3/2/2016 7:46:00 PM Walter, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment !