Scars Left Behind

These are neither ritual cuts
under the left eye 
of a married man, 
nor those forehead to chin,
proving Prussian manhood.

I speak here of geometries
describing present then gone,
marking disassembly 
within the flesh
drawn upon.

My father’s traced excavation,
down from the throat,
under seventh rib
to spine;
cracked open,
the dark parts scooped out,
replaced by I don’t know what.

My mother’s marks 
recorded her history of
loss and pain,
loss and pain,
dissertations in white script,
writ on the body
that breathed me to life.

My own trace flaws
gone sensitive to touch
in the corpus of knowing myself.


Jack Jordan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Cyrus Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:49 PM
You take the reader through a vortex. Well done, Jack.
Jordan Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Thank you. I really appreciate your comment. J
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 9:06 AM
VERY deep. So deep that I am not quite sure I got the part about your father. But I see that you are a stellar free verse writer and I hope this does very well in the contest about scars.
Jordan Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 10:19 AM
My father had tuberculosis long ago, when removal of a damaged lung was the last-ditch effort at a cure. Thanks for the support.
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 7:24 AM
Scars for life .... A well-written poem. - Good luck in the contest, Jack. - Have a beautiful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 10:17 AM
Thanks for the support.
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