Saturated In Solitude

SATURATED IN SOLITUDE The sweat and toil of snowflakes fall like great big oaks. Silent when no one’s around to hear, but I hear them call. I sweep the bounty flakes with the soul of my boot. Folks absent from this flight of serenity, solitude of downy strokes. The tip of my tongue cleansed. Soap petals after the brawl. Shivering satisfaction, saturation of snow queen’s court. My hair ribboned in whitest white of purity and regal right. Eyelashes gather wisdom’s chill, woolen hands wield forte of legible knowledge. My sacred head cauterized in port.* Saturated in solitude, my bruises and scars see the light. 4/16/2018 Laura Loo’s Rhyme Time 2 Fictional account *port - sweet wine
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Roper Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 9:20 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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April 25, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:07 AM
Thanks, John!
Inman Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 6:57 AM
You've set beautiful but lonely scene Kim. Love the descriptiveness of your write.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:08 AM
Thanks, James!
Gauthier Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 8:35 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Thank you!
Gentry Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Congratulations on your win. This reminds me of walking at dusk after a fresh snowfall, one of my favorite things to do. Enjoyed this.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Scars Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 8:50 AM
just beautifully expressed sweet Kim...congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo
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April 24, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Thanks so much, dear Laura! :)
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 4:50 AM
Solitude, sometimes welcome sometimes not. a lovely write Kim. Good luck. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:05 AM
Thanks, Tom!
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April 16, 2018 at 3:20 PM
This gives me the feeling of standing in a silent forest watching the snow fall - lovely!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Thanks, Michelle!
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