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Saturated In Solitude

SATURATED IN SOLITUDE The sweat and toil of snowflakes fall like great big oaks. Silent when no one’s around to hear, but I hear them call. I sweep the bounty flakes with the soul of my boot. Folks absent from this flight of serenity, solitude of downy strokes. The tip of my tongue cleansed. Soap petals after the brawl. Shivering satisfaction, saturation of snow queen’s court. My hair ribboned in whitest white of purity and regal right. Eyelashes gather wisdom’s chill, woolen hands wield forte of legible knowledge. My sacred head cauterized in port.* Saturated in solitude, my bruises and scars see the light. 4/16/2018 Laura Loo’s Rhyme Time 2 Fictional account *port - sweet wine

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Date: 4/25/2018 9:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:03:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thanks, John!
Date: 4/25/2018 6:57:00 AM
You've set beautiful but lonely scene Kim. Love the descriptiveness of your write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thanks, James!
Date: 4/24/2018 8:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2018 10:02:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/24/2018 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. This reminds me of walking at dusk after a fresh snowfall, one of my favorite things to do. Enjoyed this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2018 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
Date: 4/24/2018 8:50:00 AM
just beautifully expressed sweet Kim...congratulations and thank you ;) -luloo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Laura! :)
Date: 4/17/2018 4:50:00 AM
Solitude, sometimes welcome sometimes not. a lovely write Kim. Good luck. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2018 8:05:00 AM
Thanks, Tom!
Date: 4/16/2018 3:20:00 PM
This gives me the feeling of standing in a silent forest watching the snow fall - lovely!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/16/2018 3:21:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle!

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