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Saraswati's Song

Each morning when I rise before dawn Before I open closed eyes I may see The essence of my soul’s *etheric body That dwells deeply inside of me. As I look at my face in the mirror, Or is my face really looking at me? I see a strange looking lady there In hopeful longing to be set free. Saraswati please play your sweet music On your veena now called mandolin. . . Please enlighten all of my senses To discern I’ve been reborn again. I defer to your wisdom dear Goddess In knowing of my earthborn plight. My *karma like an opaque veil is lifted As your song within my heart takes flight. This poem is about the realization of my purpose here. Note: *Saraswati is the Hindu Goddess of music, arts, and wisdom Saraswati actually plays the kacchapi which is an ancient Hindu musical instrument more recently known as a veena which most resembles a mandolin. *Etheric body: The etheric body is but one of many bodies of man, reflecting, in miniature, the seven planes of the universe. The etheric has been described as a network of fine energy strands permeated with fire, or as a web animated with golden light. It is the golden bowl. These informative extracts are taken from the writings of the Tibetan Master via the books of Alice A. Bailey *Karma: (Hinduism and Buddhism) the effects of a person's actions that determine his destiny in his next incarnation

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Date: 8/18/2018 7:13:00 PM
Connie, this is one of your first posts here at Soup and I enjoyed seeing it again especially in light of the things I now believe about the universe. I don't want to go back to hotmail so I came way back here in the nether lands to tell you , that poem you showed me, to be unnamed, SUCKS. I really hate that kind of a poem. The topic could have been done. That person just did a poor job with it. My son is in town for a funeral and never even called me. Yet he will want a ride to airport Sunday!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/18/2018 7:31:00 PM
I wouldn't take it personally Andrea. Sometimes children can just be thoughtless, especially because he is grieving the loss of his friend. But as a parent I know how much it hurts. I agree with you on that tasteless offering. Thanks, Connie
Date: 8/17/2011 1:29:00 AM
Now..... You goes to my list of Fav poets...I discovered you here just today after joining the Soup in last Nov.I like your poetry...I am a Hindu and from India...glad to know that you know so much about Devi Sarswati...Don,t know from where you are.....
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/17/2011 6:49:00 PM
I live in Hawaii and have lived here for the past 32 years.
Date: 4/3/2010 10:05:00 PM
HI, connie, Here is one you posted that I had missed! It' s very nice, and I was so happy to see you share your ideas today in my blog. I dont' see what you are talking about things being changed here at Soup. I notice no diffence in how I do my comments, etc. I wonder what you meant. well, soon I want to do a follow up on my blog. I just lose so much time here, as you know. Not enough hours in the day! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/9/2010 6:55:00 PM
The subject matter on this one is truly exciting. The second stanza moved me deeply. This is the best poem I have read tonight, and I have read many. I foresee myself recalling this one from memory at random times for a long time as poems that speak to me often do. David B
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Date: 3/8/2010 8:03:00 AM
Interesting ideas and religion that you have...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work... Sara
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Date: 3/5/2010 1:07:00 PM
There is such a strong sense of peace within this thoughtful poem.....sounds as if you are someone who has such deep spiritual roots, and are open to the universe. Beautiful poetry, Connie. ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/5/2010 10:41:00 AM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Connie. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2010 11:54:00 PM
This is the start of a beautiful day, reading your poetry! such knowledge and wisdom flows from your pen, love Simone
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