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San Francisco Joy-----Senryu

     Cable car, my thrill,      Mambos up a sunny hill,     Dim Sum dishes filled.                 8/17/2021                 9am PST            Rhymed Senryu * Dim Sum is Cantonese lunch served  in small dishes, at lunch. Delicious*

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Date: 8/18/2021 2:51:00 AM
I can tell what a thrill that car ride can be, Pangie...and Dim Sum sounds more delicious than 'dim' :) ~ Warm regards // paul
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/18/2021 12:51:00 PM
Paul, best experience of a lifetime...we're those rides. And lunch in Chinatowm for Dim Sum is perhaps 100 patrons at large tables with women going around in carts who cannot speak English. You just choose the dishes you want and hope for the best,LO L
Date: 8/16/2021 8:56:00 PM
a yummy senryu indeed ~
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2021 9:42:00 AM
Line~ Love your description of this Senryu. perfect, Panagiota
Date: 8/16/2021 8:08:00 PM
Dim Sum Yum! Yum!! a delectable senryu Panagiota Well Done =D
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2021 9:45:00 AM
Hello, Paris,,, Oh, so you like Dim Sum, yes! Thank you for the visit...I liked your description, as well. Panagiota
Date: 8/16/2021 3:42:00 PM
A fascinating senryu and fascinating city! Vera and I visited there a few years back, rode the cable car, Alcatraz and many other great place around there.
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Date: 8/17/2021 9:49:00 AM
Cable cars are stunning,,and all the sites.Glad you and Vera were there, I can still hear hose bells! Living there was magical in the mid 60,s. Panagiota
Date: 8/16/2021 3:05:00 PM
So pleased that you could be there when you were. Your memories are truly treasures as evidenced in your poem.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2021 9:53:00 AM
Madelyn Yes! Tony Bennets song rekindles all those memories too. What a city it once was. I was so very blessed to live there. I was married there, too. Panagiota
Date: 8/16/2021 11:40:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I have never been on a cable car. I can just imagine the view. As for the Dim Sum, i have not had th\at for the longest time. Hugs xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/16/2021 4:03:00 PM
Hello panagiota, i know I would enjoy the cable car. It must be a good view up there. Hugs xx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/16/2021 12:47:00 PM
By..Dim Sum is terrific.none in my area, though. Riding a cable car is lovely.it does feel like you are climbing to the stars..as the song says, igot to ride one every day going to teach school in Chinatown. Those were special times,..Love, panafiiys
Date: 8/16/2021 10:08:00 AM
I was only there for a short time but left my heart there. Tom
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Date: 8/16/2021 12:33:00 PM
Oh, Tom! I thought you were in sf longer? When we get a new Governor, and things are sane, you might come back, for now! highly inadvisable. We both left our hearts there. Entancing city. It once was,Love, Panagiota
Date: 8/16/2021 9:24:00 AM
It does sound delightful -- maybe again some day. Well said. Excellent write!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2021 10:02:00 AM
I hope it returns to sanity again,do not go there now! How I missed your reply is beyond me! So sorry. Thank you for saying its an excellent writer Prinve de Mino. I think you and Princess Ila would love it. Take Warmer clothes! Fog rolls in before sundownm and it's chilly, nothing like AZ! Panagiota

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