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Quiet! Quiet! No distraction or reaction to the situation of creation unfolding syncopation ... a blues distillation. As the sax-o-phone does groan into a tirade the parade of ticks and tocks licks and knocks reverberate from the drummer, bass strummer and pi-an-o to congeal into real high fueled blues. Up and down the scales the moan wails a lascivious groan lusty riffs thrown by metal and ivory into the ether to sway with a sashay under a blue moon.

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Date: 12/20/2015 6:31:00 PM
Sue, have not seen you here in forever, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 1/24/2014 4:01:00 PM
What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.
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Date: 12/24/2013 5:04:00 AM
Sue, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 12/20/2011 7:05:00 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Sue. Love and blessings, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2011 9:08:00 PM
I hope you are okay Sue. Have not seen anything from you for some time or have you left the soup completely. Take care. love phyl
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Date: 4/6/2011 11:10:00 AM
Sue, where are you? Are you Okay? I miss you so much. Let me know. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2011 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Sue. Where in the world are you Sue are you okay. Love Carol
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Date: 2/24/2011 9:11:00 AM
Hi Sue, Congrats on your elegant poem being featured this week. It is highly inspiring to read your poems. -Mohammad
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Date: 2/24/2011 9:10:00 AM
Hi Sue, Congrats on your elegant poem being featured this week. It is highly inspiring to read your poems. -Mohammad
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Date: 1/13/2011 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Sue. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2011 7:20:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured Sue. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/12/2011 5:01:00 PM
Sue, where have you been? Congrats on the feature. Vince
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Date: 1/12/2011 12:57:00 PM
What an absolute treat Sue. I went from this read to your portfolio and found a treasure trove of talent cascading down the page of each poetic creation from your clever and well-instructed pen. I hope you continue to share your gift either here or some other poetry venue where we all can enjoy your incredible skills. Take care Sue and thank you for the pleasure of your gift. tom mcmurray
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Date: 1/9/2011 8:47:00 PM
This is an excellent rendering Sue, so glad it's featured this week. Harry
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Date: 1/9/2011 6:45:00 PM
Congrats Sue on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv.. hope u are doing well ..H.N.Y. u are missed much..luv..
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:54:00 PM
Sue who? i hope she's back. this was and still is a marvolous piece. John H Loving III
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Date: 11/24/2010 5:55:00 PM
very nice read and a wondeful write here my friend
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:27:00 PM
Dear Sue.....have not heard from you, or seen you post in such a long time. Just checking to let you know I hope all is well, and hope to see you back soon, dear Sue!! Your poetry is always a joy, and so are you! Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/18/2010 1:09:00 AM
I'm trying desperaetly, to catch up here on soup, hope you stay and write more Sue, this is so good i just love it. Harry
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Date: 10/2/2010 11:08:00 PM
this is wonderful. Where are you lately, Sue? I sure miss you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/8/2010 9:32:00 AM
Definitely a blues masterpiece, the rhythm is awesomely cool ... a sweet genius of a poem. Don't stop writing.
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Date: 8/28/2010 10:22:00 PM
A great piece of poetry Sue..hope all is well with u.. enjoyed your creativity tonight.. on this happy weekend..with luv..
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Date: 8/20/2010 12:24:00 AM
The imagery within this piece is fascinating. It's clever style is because it's writer is the gifted one indeed. What a write to nibble on. Love, Sami.
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:26:00 AM
I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Sue. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:21:00 PM
I'm reaedy to dance and sashay if you are, Sue. LOVE this delightful poem with great melody and a magical composition! Love, Carolyn
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