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Whatever happened to "Jordan" contest ~ Sponsor: Miranda Hawley

                                       July 10, 2023

Return of a Prodigal Friend

I lit a candle and began to pray that Monday morning
and a sense of familiarity hit me without a warning
when from back of the church, I heard a distinct voice.
It was one I hadn't heard in decades, but I dare not rejoice
until I knew for sure it was Jordan, a friend from the past.
Had he come home, and this time, would our friendship last?

I was afraid to turn and look, in case I was mistaken,
for when he'd left without a word, I had felt forsaken.
Not in an intimate kind of relationship. It wasn't like that
for us, but he made me laugh when he called me, 'Brat.'
I was 19 when Jordan disappeared, and I feared the worse...
that the mischievous ways of his had been a curse.

My eyes were closed when I felt someone sit beside me.
I didn't need to open them when his leg hit my knee.
It was a game we'd played when one of us was feeling down
and Jordan's smile, his beautiful smile, would erase my frown.
Now, he took my hand in his, and we both knelt to pray.
That was his way of saying, "I'm sorry, Brat. I'm back to stay."

We'd talk later, but now it was enough that he was here.
Jordan reached up and wiped my cheek of a falling tear.
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Hawley Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 8:51 PM
Congratulations on your win with this story of a reunion. Great job with this poem.
Oldham Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 6:06 PM
A beautiful and moving poem, Lin. Kudos - John
Lane Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 6:09 PM
Hello, John and thank you for appreciating my attempt to capture the return of a friend.
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 9:34 AM
such a touching piece Lin I was moved to tears. hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 6:17 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Allison Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 9:52 AM
I've just looked at the contest theme, your poem is perfect! hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 9:48 AM
Jan, to know you were touched is the best kind of comment a poet can receive. This is total fiction, and yet I felt like I could cry when writing the last few lines. I didn't know where I was going with this, but it was one of those times when I was led and glad I followed. Thank you.
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