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Reminiscence of Summer (For Maxine Grace Hylton)

Before that day splashed everything with light I played in solitude with cuddly clouds And watched them form changing figures, blight The sky or bring the sobbing sludge of rain, Or etch your portrait where the spindly sparrow fly looping your beauty with the breathless sun We watched them fall like shattered diamonds once from a window battered with fragile dreams of tomorrow And you said they were our prancing children in the water Little Shangos you called them, and we kissed In passion, filling love with lissom lilacs of laughter For life was an eternal summer then Winter was barred from where it had never been Barren landscape scarred by the lecher, not the sun Shrivelling petals and prayers, lynching the hearts like trees Barren and scraggy shredding the eye Brambled fingers clutching sky Tolling voids of air like a crucifix Self important because of the importunate Castling citadels of calamity against the hearts fear The wind exploits the calamity of leaves Only a shell of sultry shadows was left And I bereft Tented my exultation To wait your coming again And the annihilation of pain. Clouds are drifters of the sky, I am enfolded in cerulean blue Dark indigo of heart on the promenade Children feet splashing the frazzled dry of sand I shriek like a gull slant against the wind Where the splashed sand grits the eye Summer seas are all of winter's tears rinsed in light Itinerant birds frolic here: innocence excited emits delight, For lovers are children Too trusting uncarefully Undermarcated wrong or right As summer splash them like sprays Glinting the eye Where the starving eagle plays' I slant away to reminisce alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/27/2009 7:13:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on being a winner in Johns contest, a lovely written piece...kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/24/2009 6:51:00 AM
Wow! Warmest congrats L'nass on your most excellent and well deserved win in John's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/24/2009 12:36:00 AM
Congrats on your success in John's contest L'nass. Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/23/2009 6:09:00 PM
This poem was like a caress......the beauty, it makes one feel so good to read it!! Congratulations on your win !!!
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Date: 5/23/2009 12:44:00 PM
Congrats.
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:17:00 PM
L'nass, this time I sense some emotional hesitations of a sort sprinkled thru this poem filled with natural delight, nice, Jim
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Date: 4/7/2009 4:46:00 AM
L'nass, I'm gonna come back to this brightness all day today! wow! & drink in ..line/line...thx for comments! my close friends call me Jimmy! cool! Jimmy
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Date: 4/6/2009 2:52:00 PM
"I used to" line 2 "the sobbing sludge of rain" oh my what an unusual referance, why sludge? "We watched them"..dear friend who are the "them" the raindrops or the sparrows? for if it be the sparrows how can they appear as "shattered diamonds?" I feel it needs a verse break at "Winter" to make any sense at all since from "shivel ...forward is very powerful YET does not relate to the beginning? MUCH, Much for me to think on yet I don't wish to get too wordy here. Light & Love
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:38:00 AM
clouds are drifter of the sky....cerulean blue.. your magical words transform ordinary words into music that sings deeply in the soul after each read..your spirit was created to lead with words and uplift minds that are buried in the obivious...you are The Shango.
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:21:00 AM
This is great as always a thrill to read. I find so much passion in your work. You always take the reader into your work through your words. Your passion and soul truly show in your writing. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:15:00 AM
wow what roller-caoster of a poem strong and words full of drama very good write-- the best one I read this morning :)
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