Home » Poems » Caren Krutsinger » Recognized Her Instantly

Recognized Her Instantly

recognized her instantly
from his dream work
she had no idea

pursued her until she could stand no more
she dumped him hard as coal goes down a chute

did not find each other for twelve years
she had her own soul dreams by now
they burned the sky up

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/24/2020 8:16:00 PM

Caren, I can hardly wait to see what you've got simmering in the pot for 2021. But for now know I like you a lot. For my Yuletide blessing; A Merry Christmas wish and sweet sugar-plum faerie dreams. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/25/2020 12:16:00 AM

Thank you Richard. I like you in piles and heaps! Merry Christmas my friend!

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/24/2020 7:57:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile... Cheering you with blest Christmas spirit, while sharing you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/25/2020 12:16:00 AM

Thank you very much Beata. Happy Jesus' Birthday my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2020 7:05:00 PM

I agree with Rob. Burned the sky up is such a GREAT line in this pithy poem! wish I could read more but Joe is on way home and dinner not even cooked. Merry Xmas, dear.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/25/2020 12:17:00 AM

Merry Christmas Andrea. I hope it is wonderful; I am praying you can get over your health issues.

Rob Levasseur

Date: 12/24/2020 10:12:00 AM

"they burned the sky up" great line in a great short poem full of emotion.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/25/2020 12:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Rob Merry Christmas my friend!