Raindrops

Plip, plop,
Pin, tin, pin,
tip, tip, tip,
Spigga, spigga, spigga,
Ssshhhhhuff.

Window closed now
I can think.
No rain on the brain.
No more drink.

Creeaak
Goes the door,
An old friend comes in
Berated and bombarded
By drops as big as grapes that

Slam onto my tin
Trash cans: 
Skiddity-skip,
Skippity-skid skid skip,
Skiddity-skiddity skip skip,
Skip-skip-skip-skip-skips-skip-sk-

"Close the door, please."
Creeaak-shuft.

My friends soaked rain coat 
Slops to the ground,
Puddle leaking out from under it.

"How long have you been dry?"
"7 days."

Fffp, Fffp, Fffp.
Cold, wet drops find
The very top of my head.
I looked straight up at the ceiling.
Mpa. Mpa. 
Right on the tip of my nose.

I open my mouth.
Onk, onk, onk they go
Against the back of my throat.
Onk, onk, onk.

"I can get you a glass of water,"
Says my know-it-all friend.

I have no time for his kind.
These drops are divine.

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Date: 7/14/2024 11:29:00 PM
Very powerful sound effects. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Matt Caliri
Date: 7/20/2024 11:35:00 PM
Thank you! This was very experimental for me. Had fun with it.
Date: 7/14/2024 10:12:00 PM
I liked the form and sound of this beautiful poem, You a musician too? dear poet. Happy writing.
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Matt Caliri
Date: 7/20/2024 11:37:00 PM
Thanks for your comments! I actually don't play any instruments. Just my mouth and I could do the scale of the recorder in 4th grade.
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