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Purple Bliss

White butterflies flap around the plump blooms of a buddleia bush, heady on nectar and a rush of perfume from the thick clusters of purple flowers. They seem quite drunk, roused in number to swarm this beacon of pleasure. Held within a cloud of ecstasy, they are reluctant to leave, wings hiccupping in short flights never far from the next feverish sip of an ambrosial brew. Some are carried off in their bliss, wings waving goodbye out of the grinning beak of a bird. Others just wear out, never troubled by questions of why.

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Date: 1/14/2024 4:03:00 PM
an absolutely stunning right, Paul! Your descriptive words and imagery created a believable and realistic scene. I especially liked 'heady on nectar and feverish sip of ambrosial brew.' The notion of a white butterfly imbibing too much tickled me. I also liked the last two lines. Have to fave! enjoy your evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/15/2024 10:35:00 AM
Quite a simple yet deceptive poem....took some time putting it together, hence very much appreciate your kind feedback Sara. Tried to distill the scene to a sensory experience. Many thanks for tuning in to it. Regards, Paul

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