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Pulling Out Plumbs

“Be not simply good - be good for something.” —Henry David Thoreau He put in his thumb, And pulled out a plum, And said ‘What a good boy am I. —Little Jack Horner (partial nursery rhyme) Pulling Out Plumbs The yellow sun is not a stain. It warms with rays that reach the earth. Does the moon merely wax and wane? The day and night, each light has worth. A stalwart tree that faithfully a-shadows ‘round, under its leaves; gives temp’ral rest to birds; nutty food to squirrels; fruit, man receives. Are you just waxing and waning, pulling out plums, saying, “I’m good;” sitting still, simply maintaining, even nailing worldly sainthood. What is your path? How ‘bout the good that is your bent, your rays of light? Do not be found in good’s falsehood. Some former blind - God gave them sight.

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Date: 7/30/2024 12:42:00 AM
A hint of humour, serious thoughts, and great flow with rhyme. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2024 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Victor :)
Date: 7/29/2024 4:59:00 PM
This had a lot of meaning to it. Felt God in your poetry... :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2024 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 7/29/2024 2:46:00 PM
I found humor in a serious way, Kim. Your good with that, and clever message! xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2024 7:48:00 PM
I can see where you might find humor…
Date: 7/28/2024 3:49:00 PM
A good overall message in an insightful poem that I take to heart. I'm not familiar with a formal blind but I'd guess it is a hidden place. I appreciate the spirituality in this work.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2024 5:16:00 PM
Sorry, I meant “former” not formal. Thank you, Hilda!

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