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Poetic Paradise We poets feed fat In blissful romanticism Outpouring our emotions Quilling them with delight On pages and websites Bleeding hearts drip on paper Tears smudge the lines Romance lights up the hearts Passions overflowing magically In every visual or imaginary sight Ecstasy flows in a poet's heart That mortals eye as a fool's paradise Away from facing mundane truths Ignoring reality during these Treasured hours of peaceful silence We have suffered and lost The world knows not of Ambitions risen and fallen Now no qualms no misgivings Just love flowing in the river of poetry December 30, 2015 Contest : Theme # 4 Poetry Sponsor: A Poet Destroyer

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Date: 1/2/2016 12:58:00 AM
Balveen, Congrats on your poetry win. LINDA
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/2/2016 2:07:00 AM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/1/2016 9:50:00 AM
Balveen, Congratulations on your nice win. Thank you for all the time you took supporting and entering my contest this past year 2015:-) I'm taking, this time, to explain how I really enjoyed every entry. I truly wanted to place every poem, but two with high placements. However, it is a contest and with all the bickering going on about the way we judge our contest. I did not place everyone the way I wanted to in this contest. I do APOLOGIZE. Please don't be upset if you are sharing a placement or did not make the top 10. I feel every poem, should have been placed high. Stop by my latest Blog "Favorite Type of Poem" when you'd like or have time. Celebrate by sharing with us, Your Favorite type of poem. Have A Blessed Year. Love SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/1/2016 1:39:00 PM
Each to his own judgement! Follow your heart, it won't misguide you. How many storms uproot oak trees? There are no rights and wrongs. The time has to be right, Skat. I'm sad you're leaving. Wish the winds are favourable wherever you are. Thanks and blessings! Balveen
Date: 12/30/2015 7:00:00 PM
this is wonderful. I bet PD will love it!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/1/2016 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Andrea dear!

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