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Petals of pain

I am neither okay on the inside or the outside my insides twisted like a pile of tree branches left behind while the good wood is taken on the outside my eyes bloodshot as sweet sticky blood drips from my fingertips pierced by the rose thorn

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Date: 10/28/2024 11:12:00 PM
Wow, the image you use is very moving, and the flow of the poem is beautiful even in free verse, please write more!
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Karen Croft
Date: 10/29/2024 5:54:00 AM
Thank you for reading!!

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