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Petals of Pain

Once upon a time, when juliet was a jewel of psychedelic phrases ~ steering rubies of romance to distant shores, where sapphire seafoam had never kissed the silence of sands ~ there blossomed an ode, lingering beneath cocktail chandeliers, scripting a tragedy where the calligrapher of fate lost his embellished quill of ' f o r e v e r s ' I was born to witness the violins of fall ~ when lovers became nothing more than two dragon fruit diamonds, drifting apart as destiny drives constellations in castaway. They say, with fingers stretching across the ivory-iris spheres of midnight sky, and apple-tart sunsets condensed through ~ we whirl in celestial chambers mirroring magic, like apricot amulets of angels... but what if, every seraph is a scar wrapped in blinking blemishes of stars ~ bleeding raspberry tears across rhymeless riots, soaking the blank canvas of promises...? Those egoistic emeralds that deceived me by backstabbing the innocence, harvested in my heart ~ while hiding their macabre musings in own cocoon of marble-cut conspiracies, threaded with vivacious vines... pardon my aggressive aromas, which may leave raven-rose fingerprints ~ upon the tattooed tyranny of your demons, for, this one throne to rule them all hasn't been enough to erase the omen from their opalescent lens of life... Perhaps, I am a secret laid bare, which only the sorceress of sun could conceal, in the womb of honeysuckle light, as ~ a wizard is not a puppeteer, polished in gold neither he seeks for those raindrops of revenge which can engrave my unloved initials as a 'beauty of bloodstones'... I cannot be Asteria, diving in the divine seas of silver elves ~ dreaming of a moment when preachers of rhapsody would ride on cashmere feathers of Pegasus, like an oasis in the desert of cacophony... and I have been forbidden by even the worshippers of woes to imprint my pulsations with timeless trails of poisonous peonies ~ and mourn the demise of doves, breathing in me... "She is a paradise, poised with pearls, releasing the last scent of a forlorn lullaby, trapped as torment, in orchards of hate ~ as the zenith petal of pain, finally f a l l s ferrying and floating upon pistachio meadows, where vulnerability waltzes in kiwi moon-wings and peace is found within platinum walls of one's watercolor psyche..."

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Date: 11/3/2024 9:57:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Petal of Pain" write again. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 11/2/2024 4:42:00 AM
Dear Hiya, you are definitely a star, one that deserves happiness and peace and youv seen so much of life at such a young age and that can be seen and felt through your metaphors glamorising pain and more in such eloquence! If i were to quote lines i would end up quoting the entire poem, as you write in a way that my brain can comprehend, with sumptuous metaphors and imagery that speaks to my soul, and i felt so much reading this, what can i say, but just well done on writing one that really is powerful! I especially love the lines “ Those egoistic emeralds that deceived me by backstabbing the innocence, harvested in my heart ~ ” resonates with me and the entire poem resonates especially the ending! What an engaging opening too! Pleasure reading~ congratulations on your well deserved win. FAVE this is
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Date: 10/27/2024 11:41:00 AM
Gorgeous images, Hiya. Parts of this I felt also would fit into the contest on the space between stars! Thanks for your recent comment on my poem I wrote the other day.
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Date: 10/27/2024 8:33:00 AM
A jigsaw puzzle where life is shown in great storytelling of joy and pain. Unfortunately we all have to suffer pain at some point of our life.
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Date: 10/25/2024 4:38:00 PM
Powerful writing- forthright with beautiful images...
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Date: 10/25/2024 11:06:00 AM
Wow, Hiya, what great imagery and emotional depth. You are an excellent writer. Through your lush and well-placed metaphors and intricate wordplay, you have masterfully explored the complexities of love, loss, and self-discovery. To me, it is so hauntingly beautiful! Good Luck in the Contest! Autumn Blessings, MY Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/25/2024 10:25:00 AM
Wow, Such awesome and splendid writing, bringing us a story of "Juliet when she was just a jewel of psychedelic phrases steering rubies of romance to distant shores"
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Date: 10/25/2024 5:18:00 AM
She is a paradise, poised with pearls, and how precious those pearls are, dear Hiya, only the ones with open heart can realize how dear those costly pearls are to you. Love this :)
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Date: 10/24/2024 11:50:00 AM
your poems are beyond my imagination. Lots of imagery and metaphors. gl in contest.
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Date: 10/24/2024 11:12:00 AM
Hey Hiya.. Your The poem is a mosaic of striking, almost otherworldly imagery. References to "psychedelic phrases," "sapphire seafoam," "emeralds," and "dragon fruit diamonds" create a surreal, celestial landscape. These images blend natural elements with the cosmic, giving the poem a sense of fantasy and mysticism. The symbolic weight of jewels (ruby, sapphire, emerald, pearl, bloodstone) suggests something precious and fragile, often tied to love, betrayal, or hidden truths. This vibrant imagery paints an emotional landscape that’s layered, elusive, and transcendent.
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Date: 10/24/2024 10:57:00 AM
to witness pain is a blessing and a curse, and your beautiful write essays both sides with such deep insights...I enjoy the story telling technique wonderfully captured by your eloquent lines, hiya...one for the books!
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Date: 10/24/2024 10:32:00 AM
Your "Petal of Pain" is a wonderful write/story. What an ending... "Good Luck" Have a blessed day writing away............
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