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People At the Mall

Many walk past Most without bags Wearing fleece pajama pants At 1:30 on a Sunday Not a.m., we are at the mall In broad daylight, In front of people Their hair is tossed haphazardly, they are not coming from church Or lunch at Grandma's. One is wearing red heels, slick, patent leather maybe High, and a sequin skirt that is not as long as my hand. It makes her giraffe-like legs look like mini-skyscrapers She is limping now I feel her pain I remember those days Trying to look good While blisters are killing your feet Suddenly the bedroom slippers and the pajama pants make sense...

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Date: 4/8/2019 8:13:00 PM
Funny, Caren. I would love to be back at the mall. It was great fun. I did not have sore feet. Wore attractive boots and short skirts, not sequined, for sure. Everyone used to dress quite well. Those days are over! I don't like going there anymore, Panagiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2019 12:09:00 AM
It is a great inspiration for poetry, though Patti. You could go there for that reason alone, right?
Date: 4/8/2019 5:46:00 AM
oh ho ho--Suddenly the bedroom slippers and the pajama pants make sense...///
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/8/2019 8:23:00 AM
I wore bedroom slippers all over Las Vegas once after a blister came to my foot. Everyone seemed jealous of me.

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