Peddling Pride

many moons ago
I taught my son to ride
his very first bicycle
slowly at first, I trotted
beside, to hold him up
as he got the hang of it

as I ran beside 
I gave him one final push
off into the world
and he sped ahead
for a mere split-second

before crumpling over
with the bike on the lawn
crying, he looked up
in dismay and cried
"why did you push me!?"

the weight of guilt
pressed me back
as i realized my mistake
oh, panged parenthood

bicycles stood to ride
bruised we both rubbed
ourselves peddling pride
turning we continued

so that in short order
he was riding circles
around the house, and me
in his own Circle Game

© Goode Guy 2011-05-18

we both learned to ride it out, as cartwheels turned to car wheels

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/26/2011 6:48:00 AM
Thank you for sharing the heart of your poetry with us here at Poetrysoup. I enjoyed reading your fasinating poetry this morning and I look forward to reading more of your poetry Goode Guy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:28:00 PM
Nice work. Quite enjoyable.
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