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Parenting In the 1960s

The back of the leg was seen as a place That was suitable for a slap, For a child who was rude, or out of control, Or who stood in the kitchen when Mum had been baking, And who sneakily stole A freshly-baked, still-warm sausage roll, Who, on hearing a footstep, Stuffed it in her mouth – whole, And received a slap, and a sending to bed, To think about what she had done. Now it’s fifty years on, and Mum’s long gone, And looking back, I guess I deserved that slap, But who could resist a freshly-baked, still-warm sausage roll?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/10/2017 4:54:00 PM
Hmmm...So precisely,depicting the real identity. Kudos!
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Date: 8/10/2017 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on having this poem featured Deborah...I enjoyed it just as much as before. : )
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Date: 3/24/2017 2:55:00 PM
Born in the 50s here, Deborah, so yeah... : ) But dang - the back of the legs is a pretty tender area.
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:17:00 PM
I can so relate to this poem, the veracity expressed in this nostalgic piece carries me back to the 60's too. Beautiful! ; ) 7
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Deborah Alexander
Date: 3/14/2017 2:41:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. I look back fondly too.
Date: 3/10/2017 12:03:00 PM
You are a wonderful poet, my friend :) I can see this happen, and it brings a smile to my face, because yeah, that sausage roll was worth that slap, wasn't it :)
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Deborah Alexander
Date: 3/14/2017 2:44:00 AM
Thank you, Darren. Yeah, funny looking back...childhood's a funny mix of rewards and punishments, eh? (Hmm, sounds like an idea for a poem...)
Date: 3/7/2017 2:25:00 PM
This was great, I had no idea that was coming and it really made me laugh.
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Deborah Alexander
Date: 3/7/2017 2:37:00 PM
I'm glad it made you laugh! Wasn't quite sure what reactions it might provoke in readers. Mine was actually a very loving family and the smack was exceptional. I blame my Mum's cooking...it was too good to resist! Plus I panicked and got myself in deeper trouble by shoving the whole thing in! Dear oh dear.

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