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Oxygen

Two joined elements swirl around
Into its lungs with wisp of sound
Turning its blood from blue to red
Preserving life as cells are sped

And though not regnant is the right
Concentration to give it flight
From inertness so its mind
Can pursue and happiness find

If not enough then judgments slow
And other gasses overflow
Causing bones and muscles to shout
Till its progress quickly flames out

But if too much its lungs grow weak
Slowing its independence streak
Making the tissues distended 
Weight that was never intended 

Breathe just enough of life’s tonic
To perfuse a fit republic 
Ever poor so it can’t ruin us
Ever meek so it won’t rule us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/17/2019 9:01:00 AM
balance in all things. Glad to see you back with this flowing, cerebral, breath of fresh air (couldn't resist)!
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Mark Elam
Date: 1/17/2019 2:21:00 PM
Nice! Thanks I’ll keep writing. Enjoy reading poems on this site.

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