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A long, long time ago, three children met this old, gentle lady in an ancient farm, bidding them to enter her large kitchen with a sweet flavor of gingerbread and ale... Beside her , a huge, dark rabbit jeered as the children merrily romped along. From where she stood, the lady began looking like a dingy hag with a pointed jaw, and warty despicable face. Oh, no! She was the village hag crackling with delight as her quaked hands pulled and dragged the kids in a rush … “ Come along, Kent, Iris, Lynn”, whisking the youngsters toward a boiled pot. Suddenly, at the height of terror, one jolting kick burst the door open. A large giant of a man howled.” Now, listen, I am the rabbit under a spell that quickly seized a magic potion from the crone’s hidden kiln.” With a blow, he crushed the evil witch then gathered the kids in his arms. Under the red of moonlight, three children and a lumberman hummed their way out of the woods… victorious finally free! ..................... 3/8/2017 Eve Roper’s Fairy Tale For Children Contest

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Date: 3/20/2017 6:49:00 AM
Yes....quite wonderful
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:52:00 PM
Always beware of the gingerbread and ale combo. Congratulations Nette, well done...
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:37:00 PM
Congratulations nette!! Such a clear twist!! Well done my sweet friend. Big Hugggs and love deb
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:13:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Nette , I want to thank you for entering my contest. I love this very imaginative write of a lumberman saving the children ... Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:15:00 PM
I'm impressed with your delightfully horrifying fable. I felt six again. Very clever and the writing, the writing style is exhilaratingly pristine. All the best and hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/8/2017 12:06:00 AM
A fabulous tale written beautifully, Nette. Best wishes for the contest. T.J. P.S I'm doing fine. Hope to be posting a poem soon. Hugs.
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Date: 3/7/2017 9:23:00 PM
An unexpected ending, but a beautiful one. It's lovely when good wins in the end, Nette. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 3/7/2017 5:12:00 PM
Really nice Nette, frightening as it was enchanting. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/7/2017 4:05:00 PM
I love the twist and happy ending
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Date: 3/7/2017 3:46:00 PM
What an astounding story. I thought the rabbit was a villain but you kept me going with that surprising end!Take a bow.
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Date: 3/7/2017 3:08:00 PM
I love happy endings. Well done Nette. Good luck in the contest. hugs//Victor
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