Out of the Gaits

Watch the people walking – 
Check their bodies, not their faces.
You can tell a lot as they
Perambulate their paces.

Strutters filled with confidence
Step lively, arms a’swinging,
Silently announcing 
It’s their “A” game they are bringing.

Trudgers tramp with labored tread – 
They’re carrying a weight;
Dispirited, they have no place
To which they might be late.

Tourists amble merrily;
They traipse on guidebook treks,
Jauntily meandering,
Their cameras ‘round their necks.

On any city street, observe – 
Analysis awaits,
For there’s a lot to learn
By scrutinizing people’s gaits.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Collins Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 9:11 AM
Ilene - love it. kathy
Johnson Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 8:22 PM
That's quite a word, perambulate. Thanks for still teaching us. I'll try not to be late for class. Keep on perambulatin'. :)
Pettit Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 8:10 PM
Metropolitan Life Company used to air TV commercials with a jingle that said "There's nobody else exactly like you." Everyone has their unique style of movement. Good write Ilene.
Anish Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Have you ever heard the song "Walk this way". This poem reminds me of it. I usually do not try to rhyme my poems - once in a while I do. You might want to check out "Voices Israel" which offers contest and publishes an anthology once a year. B'Shalom Matthew Anish
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