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written for the contest sponsored by tom woody. If there's one thing i could change, it would be for darkness to be a distant myth, and mental health and other health issues to fade... could it be wishful thinking? As iv seen too many suffer and struggle in silence and more, I wish and pray for better days.

To shivering seas mirroring cracked crystals, I am searching for a righteous rhyme, to orchestrate eclipsed realms with blue orchids and plum blossoms, singing sunflower symphonies of blooming poetry, wishing darkness would be a distant memory. If only I could change the tunes of diabolical dialects, and swipe away twisted tendrils, veiling your vision from embracing the colors of nature that unfold diamond dreams. Perhaps, then the vicious voices echoing within your mind, would turn into a chorus of euphonious euphoria. But I’m still standing at the cusp of withering muteness, staring at the same sun and moon, watching wildflower wishes marinate in the aftermath of paralyzed insignificance. For I can read the unspoken tales of tainted tears, like suppressed reflections of scriptures untold~ floating beneath honey-glazed smiles, as hope has long been a featherless lie, wrapped in false promises of golden sunsets that seems like a cynical tactic, to drown healing heartbeats in demonic drumrolls. Today, as the light fades, I slowly caress the raining truth, wishing I could change bitter breezes, and seed periwinkle dreams with perfumed prose. Perhaps then the sky would unravel an eternal garden of amethyst butterflies, where mental health illness is nothing but a familiar myth; folklore woven in fragmented negligence. Although I’ve seen too many hearts grieving, tethered to scattered ashes of emotional impurities, pondering if life is meant to be a meaningless marathon, with no perfect finishing line, as you run, merely content, and breathless, lingering within shadowed shackles of society, seeking a reason to exist, without illusive masquerades, where stars are seen crooning chaos of reality in cold refrains. Tomorrow, when I’m gone, away from this nebulous albatross, remember my displaced dialogues, these are words of a dreamer, dressed in dainty daffodils, wishing for ivory specks of clemency~ to rise above the nefarious imagery, painted artfully by the heinous hands of calamities. In every sickness, there’s a remedy, and health does reveal roseate revelations, kinetically swerving through hydrated hymns of peace lilies, engraved as shimmering serenity within one’s soul and mind.

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Date: 3/22/2024 6:55:00 AM
Dearest Inky, congratulations on your amazing win. Wow, this poem is so wonderful, I can see why it did so well. As always my dear, you blow us away with your unique style.. Keep shining always . Hugs
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/22/2024 10:12:00 AM
Thank you sweet maria. I appreciate your visits always: sending you light always
Date: 3/17/2024 6:29:00 PM
Many congratulations, though belated on your deserving win. Wonderful with all the wonders of heart, soul, mind and mindfulness with such essence and elegance. Regards
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/22/2024 10:11:00 AM
Thank you dear: i appreciate your well wishes. Grateful
Date: 3/12/2024 5:27:00 PM
You touched my soul today what a beautiful poem exceptional expression of injustice to a spirit long gone, I E I love this, Kelli
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Date: 3/13/2024 11:24:00 AM
Awn thank you and you touched my soul too with this beautiful comment dear kelli. Im grateful for your support truly
Date: 3/12/2024 10:16:00 AM
Brilliant. Love this so - Mental illness reflects the sin of a society who can't seem to break the chains that keep us resisting the kindness that whispers grace to even those who are plagued by dark worlds. This is fearless and beautiful, enchanting as the light it shines on hearts who know hope. God bless you. A Fave. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/13/2024 11:26:00 AM
Dear Gina, thank you for the fave and for the beautiful comment. I m grateful to know souls like you that can feel the depth of my words, as mental health is something that when we see the depth of how it impacts, we would wish never existed, sending you light always strong soul I appreciate you
Date: 3/11/2024 5:05:00 PM
I suffer with depression myself- I loved your poem
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Date: 3/13/2024 11:27:00 AM
You are strong, to talk about your mental health battles, i am grateful for your support too dear paige, thank you so very much truly
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Paige Hind
Date: 3/11/2024 5:05:00 PM
Congrats on the win, too- BTW :)
Date: 3/11/2024 3:36:00 AM
"Tomorrow, when I’m gone, away from this nebulous albatross, remember my displaced dialogues, these are words of a dreamer," I love these beautiful lines. Great writing, Empress and congratulations for a deserving win. God bless!
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Date: 3/11/2024 9:59:00 AM
Thank you so much dear mb farookh for such kind words and well wishes im truly grateful for your support
Date: 3/8/2024 1:28:00 PM
This was so deep and yes, I agree, I wish mental health issues got more attention but as you know, the numbers are escalating while solutions remain mostly out of reach for many. Thx for supporting the contest
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/8/2024 1:52:00 PM
Please don't ever stop expressing and yes, I'm very close to someone who suffers and we're having a thing right now but love covers
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/8/2024 1:37:00 PM
I see lol well mental health issues are escalating but its something i wish didnt exist, only those that have seen it closely can resonate and as my note says, its just wishful thinking, and I appreciate you taking time to comment on this. Some poems are deeper than usual as it comes from a deep place. Some take things too literally, makes me wonder, why do i waste my time expressing. You are welcome and you deserve support, thank you again.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/8/2024 1:28:00 PM
Beautiful poetry
Date: 3/8/2024 1:39:00 AM
Once upon a time life was simple, I did my thing and people around the world did theirs. Now through social media we live on top of each other. People don't talk anymore, they text. We seem to be surrounded by devices that are there to help, but we've lost our own identity or maybe given it away. No way back now.
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Date: 3/13/2024 11:28:00 AM
So true, and couldnt have said it any better, what a deep and profound comment, thank you dear paul. Im grateful for your support
Date: 3/7/2024 8:19:00 PM
This poem of searching for cures has beautiful metaphors. I loved this poem.
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Date: 3/7/2024 7:45:00 PM
IE, we all hope for these good things you suggest to happen. It's part of what we all live for and strive for! TY for putting in such beautiful and kind words.
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Date: 3/7/2024 3:25:00 PM
Interesting lines penned. I think a large number of people would want a change in our world that would bring peace and love, but we all know that will not happen until The Prince Of Peace comes to reign. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara K
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Date: 3/7/2024 1:37:00 PM
Your ability to consistently impress is truly astounding, dear Ink. This piece is a complex and skillfully crafted research of feelings with deep insight and poetic beauty. The depiction of yearning, resilience, and the steadfast pursuit of hope in difficult times is highly engaging.{Mental illness has a genetic component, and medications can lead to adverse reactions}. Contrast between delicate beauty and profound truths creates a captivating tapestry of words that helps profound reflection.
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Date: 3/7/2024 11:30:00 AM
An excellent entry for this contest.. Your poem is a poignant reflection on the search for beauty, healing, and meaning in a world marked by darkness and suffering. The imagery woven throughout evokes a sense of longing and introspection, drawing the reader into a contemplative journey of hope and despair... The opening lines, with "shivering seas" and "cracked crystals," set a tone of fragility and vulnerability, reflecting the your quest for a "righteous rhyme" to illuminate the obscured realms of existence.. Your poem is a deeply evocative exploration of the human condition, inviting readers to reflect on the complexities of life and the enduring quest for healing and redemption.
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Date: 3/7/2024 10:53:00 AM
Woooow! Again, you’ve blown me away with your poetic prowess! It brings such a deep feel whenever I read your artistry. The brilliance of your lines and the mesmeric feel of your emotions, divinity, the depth and rawness is a flickering light and dark that stirs the soul. “ To shivering seas mirroring cracked crystals, I am searching for a righteous rhyme” — such a beautiful start to this masterpiece, elegantly breathing such poignant beauty and grace…
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 3/7/2024 11:32:00 AM
“pondering if life is meant to be a meaningless marathon, with no perfect finishing line” — how it truly feels..like one is running a marathon with no perfect finishing line. Just asking for—though not perfect—healing and care, understanding and mercy on a soul that’s been strong for long enough..has fought the fight as fiercely as they could. “wishing for ivory specks of clemency~ to rise above the nefarious imagery, painted artfully by the heinous hands of calamities.” — oh, you have so sincerely captured the essence of this sentiment perfectly! And the way it’s come full circle in this reflective piece is truly significantly intuitive and immensely woven, I’m enthralled with your poetic soul and deeply insightful mind, you are truly dynamic, my beautiful soul sis!
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Date: 3/7/2024 11:17:00 AM
“But I'm still standing at the cusp of withering muteness, staring at the same sun and moon, watching wildflower wishes marinate in the aftermath of paralyzed insignificance.” — ahhh! “Cusp” love that word! And “aftermath of paralyzed insignificance” I can’t even put into words how hard this hypnotic verse hit me! So flawlessly and profoundly inked! “where mental health illness is nothing but a familiar myth; folklore woven in fragmented negligence.” — ahh, so true, as brilliance and hope so beautifully cascade, exquisitely captivating, exuding your strength and your delicacy..I admire the vulnerability you courageously voiced on mental health, shedding light to each layer so immensely.
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Date: 3/7/2024 11:00:00 AM
“ singing sunflower symphonies of blooming poetry, wishing darkness would be a distant memory.” —ahhh, this is such a hypnotic line with such a powerful depth, that I resonate with so deeply! You’ve spoken what’s in my heart and soul as you always speak my soul language, my beautiful soul sis! It’s a true breath of fresh air that flows throughout! “ Perhaps, then the vicious voices echoing within your mind, would turn into a chorus of euphonious euphoria.” — I couldn’t have expressed this line as ethereally and achingly vast as you have here.
Date: 3/7/2024 9:10:00 AM
Very well crafted and poignant poem; however, mental illness is too often genetic, and drugs sometimes make the person have side effects. No matter how we look at it, these things will never go away. I am hoping in death, we will be reborn to our healthy selves.
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Date: 3/7/2024 8:34:00 AM
Your theme, so profound, resonates in your cause, to highlight travails of mental health, Ink. What an awesome beginning:--I am searching for a righteous rhyme, to orchestrate eclipsed realms-- wishing darkness would be a distant memory--And intensity of your write echoes throughout: For I can read the unspoken tales of tainted tears,---wrapped in false promises ---I like your hopeful ending: In every sickness, there’s a remedy, and health does reveal roseate revelations--A FAVE, my friend.
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Date: 3/7/2024 6:44:00 AM
Dearest Empress, You never cease to amaze me, for this is an exquisitely crafted masterpiece that digs into the depths of emotion with great insight and poetic grace. You effectively portrayed longing, resilience, and the enduring quest for hope amidst darkness. The comparisons of delicate beauty with haunting truths create a mesmerizing, intricate story of words that makes us contemplate. You are obviously very skilled in language and imagery, which is truly captivating. Yes, Empress, I would say this is a breathtaking piece of artistry. Your talent shines brightly, Empress. a FAV! - Blessings, my dear friend! - Daniel
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Date: 3/13/2024 11:30:00 AM
Thank you so much for the fave and for your support im grateful always for your deep and detailed feedback. That ensures that i feel heard and understood, it means alot receiving such accolades from a talented poet like yourself, grateful
Date: 3/7/2024 5:00:00 AM
I agree, dear Ink. Ridding the world of pain and suffering is a noteworthy and humanitarian venture. I'd like to believe it's possible, one person at a time. You've expressed pain so eloquently via your alliterative lines. These resonated with me: I’ve seen too many hearts grieving, ...pondering if life is meant to be a meaningless marathon," Meaningless marathon certainly captures the anguish and despair many feel. I appreciate your sensitive heart and soul as well as your compassion. hugs!
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Date: 3/7/2024 4:12:00 AM
Yes. One thing to change: to ease grieving and loss of hope. Your poems do that in highlighting beauty: a window on the created beauty, and through eternal windows - to see more.
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Ink Empress
Date: 3/13/2024 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much for understanding and for feeling, i appreciate your thoughtful comment truly
Date: 3/7/2024 3:13:00 AM
To shivering seas mirroring cracked crystals, I am searching for a righteous rhyme,to orchestrate eclipsed realms with blue orchids and plum blossoms, damn these lines moves so effortlessly!! unspoken tales of tainted tears, like suppressed reflections of scriptures untold floating beneath honey-glazed smiles,.. damn love the heaviness!! meaningless marathon, with no perfect finishing line.. amen papi!! I love the ending stenza papi… an absolute piece of heaven!!
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Date: 3/7/2024 2:46:00 AM
So many alliterations . Beautiful .
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