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A fairytale or not contest ** Sponsor: Fire Bird  ** January 16, 2024

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I'm on the outside, looking In Quite often I feel like the only word in a poem that doesn't rhyme, or I'm a nickle, five cents short when I'm in need of a dime. You make me feel like I don't belong. Distress is written all over my face. I'm the only wallflower at a dance. The shy one in need of a hiding place. I don't want to be the odd puzzle piece that everyone overlooks and rejects. I have a heart that's been wounded. Your ostracism has crippling affects.

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Date: 1/22/2024 10:08:00 PM
"I have a heart that's been wounded" - feeling pain as part of the tale. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/22/2024 12:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a powerful story/write. Love It... Many have felt this way at one time or another. Have a blessed day/week..................
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/22/2024 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. You’re always so kind and giving with your plaudits.
Date: 1/16/2024 9:54:00 AM
Nice songlike poem.
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Date: 1/16/2024 2:25:00 PM
Thanks, as always for your support, Jay.

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