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Old Town Elegy

OLD TOWN ELEGY The bridge still spans the road - with what design? The rail that once crossed Ridgeway and vale to the sea Erased and gone, with scarce residual sign And barely more trace than near roads of Roman decree From the bridge, track the ghosts of line, goods yard, Old Town Station Where we lingered and noted the numbers of each passing train Web of steel and of steam entwined village and town across nation 'Til Arcadian slow lines were suddenly made to wain Gone: the Market where cows sheep and pigs brought in telling perceptions The images, noises and smells of the farms to the town The tweeded farmers with leathery limbs and complexions And gaiters of deepest sheen in a rich chestnut brown Flaxen ropes, billhooks, pitchforks enough for a peasants' uprising Spread along the High street and over the Corn Exchange square While Newport Street furnished inns for all thirsts' reviving And above all, the clock tower made skyline iconic and fair Then was school run not cosseted, chauffeured, by car But raced, skipped or dawdled through field, street, market and station Our little world teamed with action, unscreened, with no bar Of health and safety; adventure without filtration In that world we seemed in different incarnation Are we the same people, and do we now view the same place? Can we yet discern immortality's intimation? The adventure goes on though perhaps at a difference pace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/27/2019 8:39:00 AM
How places change and they change so fast, we do not even notice... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/4/2019 1:06:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One
Date: 4/25/2018 9:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Geoffrey, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/26/2018 6:08:00 AM
Thanks, Eve
Date: 4/25/2018 5:16:00 PM
Another awesome poem, great imagery, flows well... memories. Congratulations on your win. (Last verse, first line, word *seemied ?seemed - easy fix. I would want someone to tell me.)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/25/2018 8:17:00 PM
Many thanks for your appreciation, Susan; and for spotting the error - now corrected.
Date: 4/25/2018 10:32:00 AM
A wonderful write, Geoffrey, though the rhyme is a bit off on the third stanza. Congrats.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/25/2018 8:15:00 PM
Line, Thank you for your kind comment and perception- rhyme now improved
Date: 8/4/2017 7:39:00 AM
Masterful pen. Much enjoyed :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 4/25/2018 8:02:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen

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