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Written: December 28, 2023 Beneath the shades of velvet shadows swarms of amber luminance of daylight and elusive flits of faerie embers. Veiled in jeweled which rhymed with  Calyx elixir tints of moonlit hues, wings of light fractals of burnished baubles. Serendipitous breeze scribbling rimes  of a runic serenade in glints of jades and emeralds. wisps of wood smoke soft mists of Myrrh and Frankincense fragrance of  Amyris and Bergamot. Life has been beckoned. by the sun messenger. In that aurifying light, crisscrossing balmily  and all at once. With your shifting cloak, snail silver tree, life is futile & vain as smoke. with your beshrews roads case of curiosity devoted to the art of taxidermy, decorative, restorative and anthropomorphic. A canorous dream, capacious mellifluous Hurry past me!              

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Date: 12/29/2023 12:13:00 PM
Dear Sotto your poem masterfully combines visual and olfactory imagery, along with a touch of whimsy and philosophy, creating a rich and immersive poetic landscape that beckons readers to explore the magical tapestry woven by the words.
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Date: 12/29/2023 1:07:00 AM
Your words always have a touch of philosophy in them, and the way you weave them is truly impeccable. Absolutely love the flow of this and depth of your lines from the very start till the end. Imagery and the way your thoughts are phrased here is so very captivating. And i especially love the sun messenger line as well as your use of different fragrance and gems adds so much ethereal beauty to the poem that evokes many emotions of the reader when reading! Pleasure always reading your work
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Date: 12/28/2023 3:43:00 PM
as I read your poem, I imagined I was on a sunlight melodic Odessey of restoration. I liked these lines: Life has been beckoned by the sun messenger. I felt uplifted after reading your words, dear Sotto. I felt the warmth of the sun giving me new life today. Sometimes I don't have quite the adequate words to express how a poem impacts me...such is the case with yours. I just know I like it. Have a splendid New Year, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 12/28/2023 10:51:00 AM
A lovely write/story/ending/pretty picture. "Happy New Year 2024" .................
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