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They sat around me in a circle with brushes and paints all to hand, their heads bobbed behind their easels back and forth as holding an apple I stand. Stark naked and still like a statue I pose while they practise their craft, I only wish that they would let me turn round as somewhere I'm feeling a draught. They'll certainly use all the colours my body has got quite a few, from the grey of my hair to the green of my stare and my varicose veins are deep blue. The copy they paint won't be faithful since totally nude is too far, so from that I have shied and one bit of me hides in the tube from a Cuban cigar. For contest 'Naked', sponsor Anthony Slausen.

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Date: 11/19/2016 4:25:00 PM
Why am I thinking again of your underwear drawer??
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Date: 11/18/2016 7:40:00 PM
Smokin' hot, too funny. :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/19/2016 9:23:00 PM
Thanks, Paloma x
Date: 11/17/2016 7:21:00 PM
I thought this was so good but I see by today's winner list, Anthony is not one for humor!! Mine sure did bite the dust!!
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Date: 11/19/2016 9:22:00 PM
Yours was great, Andrea. I suppose it's just our take on the theme. Viv x
Date: 11/13/2016 5:00:00 PM
Ha ha, you added a chuckle to my evening.
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Date: 11/13/2016 10:49:00 PM
My pleasure, Richard, thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/13/2016 4:41:00 PM
...well at least it stays up Viv.....
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Date: 11/13/2016 10:50:00 PM
Yes, a double whammy! Thanks for dopping by, John. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/13/2016 12:21:00 PM
Havana humour at its best, Viv!! You can always use empty kitchen roll tubes! Regards // paul
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Date: 11/13/2016 10:50:00 PM
It's a King Edward, Paul. Not the cigar, it just looks like a potato :( . Regards, Viv
Date: 11/13/2016 11:10:00 AM
LOL Hilarious!!!!! I almost spilled my coffee reading this!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/14/2016 9:40:00 PM
I laugh not a lift!!!!! LOL kidding!!!!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/13/2016 10:51:00 PM
Glad it gave you a lift without scalding you, Arthur. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/13/2016 10:08:00 AM
haha, THIS should win hands down. My favorite of all the nude poems I have yet seen. Awesome, Viv!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/13/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, I'm delighted you like it, and thanks for faving. Viv x
Date: 11/13/2016 9:05:00 AM
I've known a few women who smoke cigars, Viv. Love the humor:)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/13/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel, glad you like it. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/13/2016 7:35:00 AM
Very clever Viv, a good laugh.
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Date: 11/13/2016 10:54:00 PM
Cheers, Phil, thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 11/13/2016 7:17:00 AM
LOL You crack me up :) This is so funny, Viv, I love it.
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Date: 11/13/2016 10:55:00 PM
Thanks, Rebecca, glad to have tickled your funny bone. Viv x
Date: 11/13/2016 3:49:00 AM
ha ha ha this is so freakingly funny Viv - I hope its an extra large cigar tube you have lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 11/13/2016 10:56:00 PM
Big enough to fill a pram, Jan. Viv x
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