Not Ever

there was
simply
no pleasing her
as she pursed 
her lips 
in judgment
I couldn't
remember
try as I may
seeing a smile 
ever no never
light up her face



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Posted on May 3, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/3/2019 9:01:00 AM
Harsh, succinct! Well done. x
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Date: 5/3/2019 9:57:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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