Not Dead

It was reported that she had died,
but I saw her
months after the obituary.

She came to me in a dream naturally,
the mind has to be as relaxed
as a three-toed-sloth
before it can report any intelligence to us.

I knew her, the way a distant relative
knows you from an old black and white photo.

Anastasia: a crazy name for an Irish woman,
but actually quite common
in the long buried book of Celtic Memories.

I was hanging-out under my eyelids,
the way a winter sun hangs under a winter tree,
or a sloth hangs from a moist lichen reverie
maybe.

When Anastasia - her 80 year old hair
flying on countless dove-gray moonbeams 
came to me,
a pitter-pattering of soft rain
falling onto my big, round, brown,
dreaming eyes.

“I am not dead, and you are not dead.”
She said.

I should have been afraid
but fear takes much more energy
than I had at that moment.

I heard myself answer:
“Then you are alive”?

The soft rain continued to speak:
“Did I say that”? 

That’s all I remember.

Later, just for we big thinkers,
I commenced to rummage
through the long buried book
of Celtic Memories.

It was then that, ever so slowly,
I remembered.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ferdous Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 10:08 AM
Eric, I would like to translate the poem in my native language. Are you okay with that?
Ashford Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 12:08 PM
Hi Tamanna, that would be a kool thing, as long as you sent me the translation! Glad you liked it so much. Best E Send to: [email protected]
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March 17, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Eric, This is an excellent write and refreshing to find. I was intrigued by your lines, 'I knew her, the way a distant relative knows you from an old black and white photo.' Very nice & Fav. -Richard
Ashford Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 12:09 PM
Thanks for this warm translation Richard I am much obliged to you for the comment, E
Ashford Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 9:45 AM
Hi Quoth T. R. great that you found this and liked it. Glad that line resonated also! Obliged to you!
Leiser Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 5:46 PM
Great story telling intrigue as you write so smoothly and subtly, Eric! Nice work! :)
Ashford Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 6:10 PM
Thanks very much Laura, I am obliged to you for this fine review.
Ashley Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 10:14 AM
I was completely captivated, Eric. I loved everything about this exceptional poem. My imagination was there with you, embraced in the intimate atmosphere as your amazing insights and imagery unfolded. Thank you for pulling me into the wonder of your poem. Brilliant writing. A fav! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 12:30 PM
You’re welcome for the follow, Eric, and thank you, as well for the initiation of following me :) I loved the three-toed-sloth reference. Your poem offers poetic lines of rich texture. It’s a pleasure to become better acquainted with you and your exceptional poetry.
Ashford Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Thanks very much Susan, it's really a long poem about a brief idea, but I imagine that three-toed-sloth in me must have surfaced! Your comments are too kind. Thanks for following by the way.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Extraordinary piece. I pleasure to read.
Ashford Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Thanks very much for this glowing review Richard.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:28 PM
the mind has to be as relaxed as a three-toed-sloth before it can report any intelligence to us. Love all the imagery! A fave!
Ashford Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 6:37 PM
Thanks Kim. Imagine what we could do with four big toes.
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February 28, 2020 at 5:10 PM
Very cool poem Eric, thoroughly enjoyed. xomo
Ashford Avatar
February 28, 2020 at 5:16 PM
Thank you Maureen. It's always good to know you're not dead :-)
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