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I’m well aware it’s not discreet to walk barefoot upon the street. In summer too hot, in winter cold and more than that, I’m much too old. But it was not so long ago that I was just a child you know And living in the country-side where comfort only was my guide. With the school’s end and no more classes I knew the velvet of spring grasses as I ran through the morning dews, quite unencumbered by my shoes. Blood poison was our only fear. My mother warned me every year, “Be careful where you’re running dear.” as she bandaged me and wiped a tear. We’d never heard of E.coli nor that from Mersa we might die. Unaware of dangers everywhere we ran barefoot, without a care. I’m sorry for the modern child who cannot know the feel of wild abandon in the long hot summer. She must wear shoes and that’s a bummer. For Francine's "Barefoot" contest

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Date: 6/9/2011 7:44:00 PM
JOyce, as you know, I love the theme of this poem. And my dear,you are NEVER too old to go barefoot!! Congrats on Hm. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:32:00 AM
Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, Joyce
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:52:00 AM
glad u are home safe Joyce .. playing catch up is what I am doing also .. u are so welcome for the win as I appreciate your wonderful and constant support always.. am not blogging any longer..had enough with so much animosity still.. so opt to just notify individually now luv.. thankxx...
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Date: 6/8/2011 2:19:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Joyce. Excellent piece. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/8/2011 12:43:00 PM
a very nice verse and I enjoyed smiling all the way through it, especially the last two lines.....congratulations.....Syd
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:50:00 AM
Many congrats to you, Joyce : )
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:20:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your HM in Francine's contest with this delightful write .. enjoy special honor my friend..for excellence...
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:02:00 AM
congrats on your win and thank you so much for your help, cory
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Barefoot"contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 10:39:00 AM
congrats on your HM in the contest Joyce, this was adorable
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Date: 6/4/2011 11:57:00 PM
Joyce, your poem has touched a bit on what mine is about too. But I am not posting mine until tomorrow. I sure like this, sweetie. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/4/2011 4:06:00 PM
awsome, and true!!!
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:58:00 PM
this was so beautiful penned, when I was a kid i lived bare foot, good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 6/4/2011 11:58:00 AM
Dear Joyce, what a wonderful recollection from childhood, running barefoot on the "velvet of spring grasses." If I visit, let's kick off our shoes and feel that velvet again. Great entry for Francine's contest and you know I'm always pulling for you to win. Glad you enjoyed the Golden Girls. Had so much fun writing it. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/4/2011 10:00:00 AM
Great entry for Francine's contest. Nothing beats the feeling of walking barefoot. I don't need much of an excuse to kick my shoes off! Best wishes in the contest Em :)
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