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I was an ambitious fine watchmaker, looking forward to sunshine tomorrows, Like the remote edge of a fuchsia horizon, where gather racy, blue swallows. I worked on clocks of all styles and sizes, repairing both old and the modern, As spring beds each year boast old styles, and new ones, in fields untrodden. I loved useful work that challenged me, requiring masterly skill and precision, As autumn is challenged to create beauty, keeping up summer's fading vision. Friends and I went to fetes together, in feathered and beribboned fascinators, As crystal stars stand together in sparkles, to become bigger drama creators! Fanciful family roamed among scarlet roses, along sunshiny paths of welcome, Like the golden further side of rouge sunset, or cherry Mars, seen but seldom. I lived in the house of inscrutable mystery, where trees sheltered a hideaway, Like aged, fleeting years sheltered in memory, lest they should all slide away. Glossy starlings sang sassy summer, in jade spruces and shrubs on my street, Like a trumpeting of many elephants, when upon green savannahs they meet. Nimble neighbors raced satiny sunset, beating a floral path to my front door, Just to laugh and engage in small talk, as we'd done a thousand times before. Summer sun soaked hills and valleys, when a full moon trailed glossy ribbons, Like a pretty fortune in fruitful riches, to satisfy day and nighttime ambitions. Purple hydrangeas graced shady gardens, and redbirds sang on window sills, And pink clouds touched red mountaintops, in the hour of peach, dawn thrills. Because I hated to ever be late, I overcompensated by being often too early. Friends teased, calling me, 'Miss Punctual,' as stars wink in moonlight pearly. On a rare day, while at a clock shop, to purchase a fancy clock for my home, I was gaily loving my browsing, as dark zones enjoy noon, when stars roam. The people present suddenly disappeared, as a vague blur went by my eyes, Only to reduce its speed to slow motion, like clockwork moments, so precise! Was I imagining facts, or could it truly be him, wearing his varied timepieces? Yes, it was Father Time, standing still, paused amid the world's long speeches. 'Why are you in such a rush,' he said, 'when I can't ever be outrun by people? For once I've passed, there's no retrieval, as that'd cause too much upheaval.' 'Various deadlines and commitments are critical, but slow down and enjoy life, For it's the joyous, relaxed moments, that give precious meaning to the strife!

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Date: 9/6/2023 7:36:00 AM
I myself rush nowhere, cos nowhere is always more exciting. Mind you, I do get fired a lot. Maybe put a watch in my coffin to remind me.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/6/2023 11:41:00 AM
Lol, sure hope it doesn't come to that, Paul. Thank you for your comment. :)
Date: 9/2/2023 2:13:00 PM
A wonderful write/story/picture/ending. Love It... Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/6/2023 11:43:00 AM
Thank you for the sun rays you've sent my way, Paula. :)
Date: 9/2/2023 8:27:00 AM
So many equally beautiful lines of imagery, I could not pick a favorite if I tried -- yes, I regret having wasted any of it, chasing after what could not be caught, while running away from all that needed to be -- lots I would change...but Time says, no..., my sweep unstoppable. Lovely poetry! No time here wasted.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/2/2023 12:19:00 PM
Your warm words of esteem are very nice! Thank you so much for your gratifying comments. Best of wishes. :)
Date: 9/2/2023 6:03:00 AM
Magnificent imagery and very original to deal with father time.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/2/2023 12:17:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed this tale of elusive, Father Time. Thank you for your comments.
Date: 9/2/2023 5:02:00 AM
Splendid images throughout, slowly but surely unveiling the life of a fine craftsman. I like as well, the uplifting message of your ending lines, Evelyn.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/2/2023 12:14:00 PM
That is so great to know, Vijay. I deeply appreciate your thoughtful remarks. :)
Date: 9/1/2023 7:22:00 PM
well written, slow dow, is a precious motto, the poem is very thoughtful and subtle, the watchmaker knows what he is talking about, i agree with him, thanks for sharing have a nice sunday Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/2/2023 12:05:00 PM
Your kind words of encouragement and joy are so much appreciated, Yann. I hope your day is wonderful. ;)

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