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Naps In Your Nice Hair

My hair fills the circumference of itself And takes up space with little help It goes the only way it knows In tightly bound cornrows In church the preacher talks about my hair To entertain everyone there Saying 'comb out your unchristian naps!' Someone says 'Amen' and claps I cannot change the cross-heavy volume But no one hears over the organ's tune I turn the locks into a twist Can't wear my church hat with hair like this My hair fills the circumference of my life Till there is space for nothing else about me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/11/2018 5:51:00 AM
Jasmine, I smiled when I read this. So natural and honest...just like your hair! At the end, we can only satisfy ourselves:) Really nice read!
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 8/11/2018 6:21:00 AM
Thank you Gabrielle!
Date: 7/30/2018 3:21:00 PM
Love your sonnet and your subject matter. Harry
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/30/2018 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Harry!
Date: 7/29/2018 11:56:00 PM
Excellent imagery, all very easy to visualise. It makes me think of my sister, her hair has always been very thick, very curly and very beautiful. And for many years I wore my hair long, much to the dismay of my very conservative mother. Enjoy that hair, it should be appreciated as your crowning glory.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 7/30/2018 10:07:00 PM
Thank you Lawrence! :) your empathy is much appreciated.

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