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Where sunless river weeps and waves into the deep Please awake me not as I sleep very charmed sleep. Have many a names in different cultures world over Boann, Anqet, Mujaji, talaya, Lelawala, & Tsoninar Native American know me as Lelawala goddess of rain My father married me off to a king as I was fair maiden But my true love was He-No, the god of great thunder Lurking in cave under *Horseshoe Falls of Niagara water. Paddling a canoe on the Falls, was swept off the Falls Luckily He-No caught me while falling down the Falls. Here happily I and He-No live in the caves of Niagara That’s my story and now is time for me to get to action. Watch me on my favorite horse Backahasten or Ashrays Falling from the great heights clinging to dewy softness Lo! My grasp gives way and feel free to fall through air My brothers and He-No with me I no longer have fear. The sun peeks out above, the rays pierce from top to toe Amazed to see an array of colors forming the rainbow My flight continues on, the wind moves me side by side Wait no more to find what lies as I complete this ride. The earth is near and the air feels warmer all around I dance from leaf to leaf and fall softly to the ground Hand in hand with buddy drops glide the wet terrain A mighty stream I am now and no more a drop of rain. * I have placed a picture of the Horseshoe Falls, The American side of Niagara on my blog photos. You can also see Picture poem on this link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qI9fMJt1-- I visited the Falls in June, 2000 ================================== Dr. Ram Mehta Sixth place win in: Contest: Rain, the story sponsored by Constance La France ================================== *Lelawala, rain goddess in Native American legend, Boann – goddess of the River Boyne in Irish mythology Anqet- was originally a water goddess from Sudan Mujaji - South African rain goddess Talaya- is a Canaanite Rain-Goddess, the dew or rain personified Tsovinar - the Armenian goddess of sea and rain Bäckahästen - means brook horse; this was the name of a mythological horse in Scandinavian folklore Ashrays – Scottish mythology - Horse

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Date: 1/14/2011 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:17:00 PM
Dr. Ram, I am happy to see you won the contest with many other marvelous poems of RAin. Excellent writing, my friend!
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Date: 1/13/2011 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in Constance's Contest, Dr. Ram. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:55:00 AM
A remarkable blend of cultures add so much magic to this poem, Dr. Ram. I love the thought of Rain finally uniting with He-No and living in the caves behind Horseshoe falls. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:24:00 AM
Nicely written and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/13/2011 8:42:00 AM
What a wonderful story you have written about Rain, such graphic and detailed description.....I love this magical piece...and the you tube too, is mezmerizing! Well done, my friend....this is wonderful !!
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Date: 1/13/2011 8:06:00 AM
Thanks for your good wishes and congrats for your win also in the Rain, the Story contest Dr. Mehta. Love and best wishes...Ravindra.. Dr. Ram Mehta.
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:20:00 AM
i'll toast to this creative, superb piece, dr. ram... CONGRATS on the high win! :) nette
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:08:00 PM
Many Congrats Dr Ram on big win with this imaginative and informative verse. Quite a good Research work done on Rain GOD.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:31:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram for an amazing win in the Rain Story contest with this exquisite entry .. enjoy a well deserved top spot with luv my friend.. always amazing..
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:01:00 PM
Knew this was a sure winner. Lots of congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:15:00 PM
Dr. Ram, I love how you captured the combined strength of the water and the falls by mentioning all the names of the goddessess and how you took that last stanza and grew rain from a drop to a mighty stream. A mighty powerful write! It should do very well in the contest! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/28/2010 12:27:00 PM
Oh this had to be hard cause it was such a great read.I really enjoyed this.Thanks for the kind comment.Good luck to you to.Teresa
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:12:00 AM
Great story, I love the mythological side to it, well written! Thank you for your comment Crystal~x~
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Date: 12/28/2010 4:09:00 AM
You have weaved a wonderful story with all the details of mythological background. Great write Dr.Mehta. My good wishes for your entry and thank you for your appreciation of my Rain, The Story. Love and best wishes for a Happy New Year....Ravindra...Dr. Ram Mehta.
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Date: 12/27/2010 10:42:00 PM
A beautiful vivid story of rain you have penned Dr.Mehta.
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Date: 12/27/2010 7:59:00 PM
This is awesome poetry Dr. Ram. All the very best for the contest.
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:33:00 PM
This is wonderful Dr Ram, A saga of the rain Gods, especially welcome here in western Australia, we are deep in to the worst drought ever, baking in 110 plus degrees. Harry
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Date: 12/27/2010 5:57:00 PM
A great story of Rain~Enjoyed~Rick
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Date: 12/27/2010 4:46:00 PM
Such an interesting story about the goddess of the rain..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Much effort that you made to do this one..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2010 3:41:00 PM
Hello Dr. Mehta, This is remarkable! So well done, I love it! Most entertaining and a lovely poem. I think it is a winner........................ As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/27/2010 2:44:00 PM
Hello to you Dr Ram. You once again amaze me with your knowledge. Even the Irish Boann which I did not know. The best of luck in the contest with this great piece. Especially the last line,' A mighty stream I am now and no more a drop of rain'. Eamon
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