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Written for " mama" contest sponsored by the silent one

Dear Life I’m lost within words unwritten between pastel pages of the past, Yet I weave my love for my sun in shimmering shades of sunsets and northern lights, wishing the amaranthine tale of my heart would be read and felt, despite the tuneless lines that f l o a t in sync with the tears that hugged my quilted quill. So many verses refuse to remove their vibrant veil. He’s always been my favorite prompt, although metallic metaphors hide behind crooning clouds carrying rainbow runes, envious of the lavender love I express through perfumed phrases, personifying the perfection of our boundless bond. I remember the selenite rays of June, ornamenting sapphire skies with ivory petals of musky roses, reflecting the sensitive speech of my moon child. Perhaps, the universe heard my poetic plea, as I’m no longer falling apart, like thoughtless chains of dominoes I’ve built, in the hope no storm shall destroy them. I’m more than a victim to vicious vines, whirling across colorless spheres, deceived by ice green lies, resembling dying poppies upon fields of bramble weeds.. I am a fluorescent bronze rose, blessed with a shield adorning razor edged thistles, Sprouting, and swirling through spiraling darkness, Yet redolent rhymes can never synchronize how motherhood changed my vain vision of pearlescent priorities and periwinkle perspectives, from obsidian tears to glistening gloaming. Who would have thought that maternal heartbeats could mirror endless rivers, rippling with responsibilities, that ebb and flow in highs and lows, Although time unfolds trials of purified patience, I've awoken my instincts to follow intuitions. Trust has become my nemesis, unafraid and unmoved by envious eyes, that mirror deceitful dialects. Once a fragile target, now my strength is unshakable. I've seen him blossom in an effervescent spirit. I rise to the sound of his acapella laughter, as the symphony of his golden sighs emanate fragrant flowers flourishing within his heart. He is my son, in days of defeated darkness, he is my reason to smile, and weld weapons of love to slay demons within wicked winds. For he gives me purpose and reason to release ink.

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Date: 3/13/2024 5:14:00 AM
A touchingly beautiful write. A mother’s bond priceless.
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Date: 3/11/2024 5:23:00 PM
Wow, made me tear up...a blessed son is he :)
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Paige Hind
Date: 3/11/2024 5:23:00 PM
Another win? Congratsss <3
Date: 3/11/2024 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative Mother's Day write with a Great Ending. "Love It"  A FAVE For Me... Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 3/10/2024 9:20:00 AM
A lovely dedication show for your son.. You write about the trials and tribulations a mom faces, sometimes with so much adversity.. I think many do not realise how hard it can be for a mom sometimes.. your choice of words and metaphors are vivid as always and add depth to your poetic words.. It is Mother's Day here in the UK, so I thought it would be nice to feature mum related poems.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 3/7/2024 7:01:00 PM
IE, your description of the love for your son is telling and inspiring. Thank you for sharing the transformation having a child has made in your life. You start the poem calling him your sun. It's a very clever play on words and very meaningful.
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Date: 3/4/2024 3:01:00 AM
What a glorious ode to your son. The imagery is exquisite! I like how you address the poem to Dear Life. "the symphony of his golden sighs emanate flowers flourishing within his heart."
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Date: 3/4/2024 1:06:00 AM
so wonerful and touching poetry i specially enjoy the tribute to your mother, images are so gracious, the poem enlight the reader as me, thanks a lot IE, have a good week
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Date: 3/3/2024 6:44:00 AM
I’m lost within words unwritten between pastel pages of the past, sun in shimmering shades of sunsets.. ooo these alliterations!!!! ornamenting sapphire skies with ivory petals of musky roses,reflecting the sensitive speech of my moon child…. Love that line n the rush of emotions it brings to this piece… motherhood changed my vision of priorities and perspectives, from obsidian tears to glistening gloaming. maternal heartbeats could mirror endless rivers, Oooo these lines papi!! chills!! Gorgeous dedication
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Date: 3/3/2024 6:22:00 AM
This is so heartfelt-- a poem exuding mother's love in every line. A touching reflection on the bond of love and joy between mother and son. ---He’s always been my favorite prompt---He is my son, in days of defeated darkness, he is my reason to smile, and weld weapons of love to slay demons within wicked winds...So blissful--so precious! A FAVE!
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Date: 3/3/2024 5:52:00 AM
Such a beautiful tribute to your son. I'm sure you're a good mamma, though you express a typical parent's uncertainties in stanza six. Does he look like mom or dad? No matter, if he's loved it's all good
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Date: 3/3/2024 5:49:00 AM
I agree with Daniel...missed you and your loving presence here on PS. I found this poem an artistic expression of love and transformation that comes with motherhood. You are blessed to have that experience, and I can tell from your words that your value all that it brings to your spirit and soul. Such a soulful creation! Hugs and have a splendid Sunday, Sara
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Date: 3/3/2024 5:20:00 AM
Dearest Empress, I missed you :). Wow, your poem is an exquisite piece with the beautiful blend of love, resilience, and transformation. Your well chosen artistic words capture the ebbs and flows of life's journey with profound honesty and beauty. And yet your imagery of shimmering sunsets and moonlit skies reflects the complexities of human emotions and the enduring power of maternal love. Your son, a gift, a beacon of light amidst darkness, inspires hope and purpose, igniting the flame of creativity within you. This is an Fav for it is ann intimate glimpse into your soul. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/3/2024 5:09:00 AM
Dear Ink, this wonderful poem about the transformation and empowerment that comes from the experience of motherhood. And the journey through love, pain, and growth, as well as the profound impact your son has had on your life. Your diction as always is rich and evocative, with vivid imagery and sensory details that create a deeply emotional and introspective atmosphere. Your use of metaphors, personification, alliteration, and symbolism convey the depth of these emotions. BOL in the contest
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Date: 3/3/2024 4:28:00 AM
Ahhh..your poems about your son/sun always hits me deep in my heart and soul..I can feel the deep love you have so immersed and beautiful! So perfectly full circle..it truly brings me to tears my beautiful soul sis! I can’t even pick and choose lines, for the whole of this art piece has my heart! You are truly a poetic soul..walking and talking artistry..you are a wonderful mother to a precious little one (not so little)! This is a truly soul stirring and touching graceful beauty!
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Date: 3/3/2024 4:21:00 AM
So touching and honest . Beautiful
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