My Hometown

Grew up in the sixties
on Long Island, N.Y.,
where we had sidewalks,
and where you could walk,
to local stores, schools, or doctors,
or just your neighbor for a talk…
Summers went swimming,
at the Village Green Pool,
afterwards bought a Mr. Softee cone
to help me stay cool,
In the Fall went to Northside Elementary,
then later Division Avenue High...
and had to walk to school,
there was no bus ride…
Winters watched Ed Sullivan,
with my family and dog,
keeping an eye on the fire,
and the smoldering logs…
Went back for a visit,
could see the change,
with trees a lot taller,
the houses with built on dormers,
the taxes got a lot higher,
Nassau County is to blame…
Can you guess
where I am from,
my hometown was built in the late forties,
for returning vets,
by a man none other than,
Mr. Levitt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 12:34 PM
I agree w/Paul and the Silent One, Cheryl. Just a jewel of a poem. Beautiful bio w/nostalgic imagery. Lovely, quite lovely piece of prose. Ty for sharing w/us a slice of your wonderful life. Stay blessed my dear. Love and more love to you always.
Schneiter Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 10:56 PM
This is a thought-provoking, nostalgic , finely rendered adventure in history--the history of cheryl's hometown and the era in which she was raised. I enjoyed every line. Excellent, cheryl.
Hoffman Avatar
June 16, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Thanks so much Paul, its kind of like my poem trip down memory lane! Glad you enjoyed it Paul!:)
Bradfield Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Very nicely done. My wife had an uncle who sold his farm to the builders of Levittown and moved to Florids...I can feel the nostalgia in your work.
Bradfield Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 9:12 PM
I probably misled you...his land was sold to the Pennsylvania Levittown which would have been about 1950. Pretty sure the New York Levittown was much closer to the war's end..1946 probably! Sorry for the error.
Hoffman Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 7:34 PM
Oh wow, just out of curiousity, what year was that Larry. Thank you for your visit and kind comment btw!:) p.s My family and I lived in the street section of Levittown that were named after birds, ours being Kingfisher Street...
Ashe Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 11:55 AM
Mr. Softee cones were a treat and I enjoyed many growing up back east! Ed Sullivan every Sunday night! Very thought-filled write! Write On!...Levittown?
Ashe Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 9:39 PM
In Boston, Mass.
Hoffman Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 8:37 AM
You are correct as Alex Trebeck from Jeapordy would say! Living there when I was young reminded me of the movie "Pleasantville" a little bit, but then in the late 60's it started to change and the town wasn't as "pleasant" to live in anymore…where did you live back east?
A  Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 2:20 AM
cheryl hoffman, this is a great poem to share, thank you. SKAT
Hoffman Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Thank you Skat, it brings back a lot of memories...
Hoffman Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:28 AM
My brothers, sisters and I lived there (guess, the clues are all there!) until 1972 when we moved further out on Long Island to Nesconset. Us older siblings did not like the move since we missed a lot of our friends in junior and senior high school from guess where. Found out later that Billy Joel grew up in the town next to ours! Thats another clue! Happy reading and God Bless all of you!
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