Musing

Masterfully Using Sexual desires Inducing Naughty night time Gyrating Gratifications Penned 6/12/2015

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/15/2015 3:13:00 PM

Cleverly done Seren... I think I need a shower after this one! Neat alliteration and assonances. Well done! Best wishes, Keith

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/7/2015 6:04:00 PM

Got some cool alliteration going on here too Seren. Very nice acrostic...to masterfully use sexual desires to drive the muse makes for an exciting composition. Always, Laura

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2015 3:45:00 PM

ohh err Seren good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 12/6/2015 6:18:00 PM

Haha it sounds good....Seren