Mountain Gorillas - the Rondelet Style

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~Mountain Gorillas~ 
(Rondelet) 


Mountain gorillas are so cute 

They're extremely smart and bright 

Mountain gorillas are so cute 

They can attack and become brute 

Gorillas live in groups day and night 

Now they're protected and that's right 

Mountain gorillas are so cute. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
ladydp2000 
copyright@2010 



September.18.2016 


~Author's  Notes:

The Rondelet  is a French form  or style consisting of a single septet with two rhymes and one single refrain.

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Miraj Raha

Date: 9/19/2016 8:10:00 AM

very cute poem Dorian.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 10/14/2016 1:18:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Miraj , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D